Reviews for Royal Wedding Ouch!
Natari Mirumura chapter 1 . 6/10/2012
Wow. I did not see this coming. Very funny, and love the unique twist. It really makes you think if Cinderella was comfortable in those heels xD Amazing, keep it up :D
Dark Blue Lover chapter 1 . 12/12/2011
LOL! Clever idea (: Love that Cinderella swears too XD Much more relatable than the usual "oh-the-drama language" of the fairy tales. Great job on this :D
creating.myself chapter 1 . 9/20/2011
Me gusta.
Princess-anna57 chapter 1 . 9/3/2011
Haha that made me laugh out loud (literally!). Your haikus are always very clever, I adore this! Please post more poetry soon!

Anna _
Raebie chapter 1 . 12/10/2010
Okay, that's one thing I never thought of, cutting her foot. Very clever!
mandycorinthos chapter 1 . 11/17/2010
Lol, I guess you can't have happily ever after without some sort of price to pay.

Good job :)
sophiesix chapter 1 . 5/22/2010
hey, thems the breaks of rising above the glass ceiling ;)

:boom tish:
SirScott chapter 1 . 5/13/2010
That's funny. I never thought about Cinderella cutting her foot.

Dante's Disciple chapter 1 . 5/8/2010
Lol, brilliant, silly slippers :)
wo bu ai ni le chapter 1 . 5/4/2010
Fairy tales writers are pretty inconsiderate aren't they.

I can imagine little Cathy from Wuthering Heights saying "I'm never going to meet another boy, so might as well get together with Hareton."
tiger002 chapter 1 . 4/29/2010
That was good. Well, after she heals she'll live happily ever after.
natmarie chapter 1 . 4/27/2010
Haha. Oh the irony. Love it. Nicely crafted into a haiku. I never have been good at those.
East-0f-Eden chapter 1 . 4/27/2010
Isca chapter 1 . 4/27/2010
The title reminded me of the Swedish royal who just broke off her engagement after she discovered that her fiance was adulterous. Dun dun dun dun! :P

I really like this haiku. You took a cliche fairytale story and made it your own; kudos! I love that Cinderella swears, by the way. I don't know why. I just think that makes her so much more "relatable" and "modern." :)
J.A. Fletcher chapter 1 . 4/27/2010
This was very funny. I always wondered why the hell anybody would wear a slipper made of glass, of all things.
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