|Reviews for The Lotus Eaters pt I|
| improv chapter 1 . 5/1/2010
What an intriguing introduction ) I really like your tone/voice in this and how it can switch so suddenly: "The powerlines overhead gently rocked in the imperceptible breeze. But what the fuck was on top his mailbox?"
It's great I can still see some of your writing here and there, even though you've left Quizilla, and I hope you'll continue this. It sounds good.