|Reviews for The Train Howls|
| simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 6/18/2010
Review Marathon this weekend! (link in my profile)
"ghosts/of flesh beside me."... I really liked this part. I thought the idea of ghosts of flesh was really creative and an interesting contrast in a way. I also like how you split the line there because it made me think you were just saying ghosts and the next line really changed the meaning of that.
I also like how long that middle line is. It's a refreshing change to see a haiku with such a long line...
| tonight we bloom chapter 1 . 5/9/2010
| Isca chapter 1 . 5/2/2010
"Sounds so strong they form ghosts." Oh wow. I love the idea that 'howls in the night' give birth to actual 'ghosts.' That's brilliant.
| nickyO chapter 1 . 4/29/2010
Atmospheric. I can picture the thought.
| Black Sparrow chapter 1 . 4/29/2010
Eerily beautiful. I love you writing - I see you've gone on a bit of a spree here :)
| YasuRan chapter 1 . 4/28/2010
Seriously, when are you heading to the publishers? I'd sure buy any one of your work.