|Reviews for Cello Player|
| simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 6/18/2010
I think fp spazzed and put your title twice in the beginning.
The line break between the first and second line seemed a bit forced for me for the syllable count. The flow just didn't seem right with wild and Alaske separated.
I love the idea of her being barefoot in Alaska. It's such a simple description, but it says so much about her since Alaska is not at all where you would be barefoot. The last sentence is also really great. Beautiful description.
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| savor those enticing dreams chapter 1 . 5/4/2010
oh my goodness,
i have a crush on the cello.
| Isca chapter 1 . 5/2/2010
I love the connection between nature (Alaska & Barefoot) here and music (Silk-Sound). That's beautiful! :)
| tonight we bloom chapter 1 . 5/1/2010
| Saurosuchus chapter 1 . 4/29/2010
Beautiful imagery. The idea of her being barefoot is especially captivating as it leaves her so vulnerable.
| Raven-Illeen Saint Claire chapter 1 . 4/29/2010
One simple word to explain it.
| nickyO chapter 1 . 4/29/2010
A very lovely image.
| Black Sparrow chapter 1 . 4/29/2010
prism of silk-sound."
Love this line :) Beautiful.
| YasuRan chapter 1 . 4/28/2010
Love that summary and the abstractness :3