Reviews for Thomas teaches kids to say Marijuana
Isca chapter 1 . 5/2/2010
"Muscles taught like the puff of a joint." It should be "taut." Otherwise, I really like this line; it's a brilliant simile. :)
nickyO chapter 1 . 4/29/2010
I'm too square for this poem ;)

But please keep writing your poetry because it is wonderful to read.
Black Sparrow chapter 1 . 4/29/2010
Ha. Of course. Drugs :P

Great Haiku.
YasuRan chapter 1 . 4/28/2010
Nasty ol' Thomas. And thank YOU for writing!