I loved this :D Team Chace all the way!

Liz's uncertainty seemed real enough, I know people in real life don't always know what they want straight away.

I don't want a sequel but I do want an epilogue or something though D; To end it just when they get together...

Okay, so I've read the whole thing, rooted for Chace and Liz the whole way through but something still confuses me. The title? I was sorta expecting someone major in the story to commit suicide or someone they know but, nada.

i feel your work is unrealistic and you need to work on that to improve your stories success rate in the future just a helpful thought

As you can tell from my review timestamps, I just read this all the way through. I LOVED it! I know that my life won't be like her's when I finally get a job, but I liked how she had to get to know her job and her coworkers.

I thought her interactions with her best friends were really good and realistic, especially having a group of friends, since most young women I know have a few close friends and not one like you often see in stories. I appreciated the remarks about how she didn't want her best friends living so far away from her but she didn't have a choice.

And, of course, the two hot guys were nice. :-) I liked that she got with Chace, since I feel like the cliche in stories is to have the character get with the more "responsible" or "everyday" job, based on job, which would be Tim. So choosing Chace was a good move.

To answer your author's note, I think that her trying to choose between them was believable. Also, I can't think of anything that was unimportant to the storyline. Maybe Matt breaking up with Amanda and getting with Ashley? But I liked adding more depth to the secondary characters, and if Kendy gets a new romance Ashley should get one too. :-)

I just found this, and can't wait to read the rest! I'm really enjoying it so far, since it speaks to my experience. I've found that there seem to be a lot of longer stories about high schoolers, some of which I've read and were quite good, but I'm a senior in college who is looking for a job and so I'm VERY pleased to find a story that is closer to my life experience! Especially since my current relationship with my parents is close to the one between Elizabeth and her parents. :-)

Just finished reading your story, and I LOVE IT! I absolutely fell in love with Chace. Tim had his moments. ;]

I really liked your use of dialogue, and the steamy sex scene was the perfect amount of tastefulness and sexiness (for lack of better word).

There were some parts where the story seemed a bit rushed, like when Liz was trying to find closure with Dianna, but I thought you did a good job portraying Liz's uncertainty between Tim and Chace.

I instantly fell in love with this story! The characters were wrote very well. I look forward to reading more of your work, excellent job!

Just started reading it. I love the writing, and the characters are so incredibly easy to relate to. I'd love to see more stuff!

Hm such a sweet story!

That was excellent! I think Liz's uncertainty was believable, although I wish she had been a little more certain in the end. That felt like a bit of a loose end. I think you should write an epilogue though. Just saying. :)

ah oh my god! i actually love this story! i was rooting for chace from the start and just ah haha this story is amazing! seriously! congratulations! amazing job!

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LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE!

Ok...

You asked for answers to the questions at the end of your last chapter...so here it is...and it answers both questions.

Her uncertainy feels real, she DID sleep with Tim and that makes everything harder...but I don't like how she still isn't all for Chase even at the last chapter...she still loves Tim, and she hasn't slept with Chase yet...I think she should either sleep with both...or neither...or only Chase...but not only Tim, it makes it so that she has something with Tim that she doesn't with Chase...and well, I guess that's just my opinion. I liked the story for it's realness...and i LOVE that you aren't doing a sequel, it's a great stand alone story!

Thanks for writing it!

Kristine

hey wow i really like how it turned out. her and chace together and etc etc. lol(: this story is really nice:D thanks for writing it:D

Jiayee

Great story! I don't think that Liz's uncertainty was unbelievable, but her feelings for Chace seemed to emerge too suddenly. Looking forward to read more of your work :)