Reviews for Suicide Squeeze |
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![]() ![]() Yay Chase! His scenes were my favorite. Keep up the good writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lovely :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved Liz's quite enjoyment over the swelling on Diana's face, made me chortle. Nice one. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I've really been blown away by how much I enjoy this story! Sports haven't ever particularly interested me - baseball least of all, but the way you've tied them into this story has worked well! You've also done a masterful job at developing your characters with this story, and the pacing of it is spot on, too. Overall, no complaints - I think you're doing a great job, and I can't wait for another update! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm glad she punch Dianna, I'm just sorry to hear she didn't slap Tim as well... Tim really is selfish, and he needs to grow out of it befor getting into a relationship... |
![]() ![]() ![]() What a sweetie Chase is :-) Man Tim is just a big relationship fail lol! Please update again soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow the punch wasn't at all expected. You go girl Team Chace all the way now |
![]() ![]() that punch was so awesome! and how cool is it when your BOSS laughs about u punching out a coworker! LUV this fic just found this fic 2day and read all 12 chapters in 2 1/2 hours! update soon this fic is awesome! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I SO LOVE that she punched Dianna in the face. She deserved it in the worse way. I'm not sure if I've reviewed this story yet, but let me just say I love it and I always look forward to your updates.I'm still torn between chace and Tim. I think that maybe just maybe if he can pull his head out of his ass Tim and Liz could work out. But then again chace is such an all around sweetie but he recognizes that he's married to his career right now so at least he's not giving her false then again Liz seems like she can handle that kind of relationship... *sigh* I'll just have to see where you end up taking this one. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome story :D cant wait to read the rest |
![]() ![]() ![]() So I let out a bit of a disappointed sigh when I realized I was on the 11th, and therefore last, chapter for now. I really love your writing. I always appreciate it when subtle but very real hints are given throughout a story so plot developments don't just come out of left field and seem hard to believe or unplanned. I'm not at all saying that the story is predictable, but that you're writing it well; in a way where it's obvious you know what you're doing and have penned out the story more than just a chapter in advance. Therefore, we the readers can really see why things are happening the way they are. That, I think, is the sign of a good writer. And right about now, I wish I was one too so I'd be able to explain what I just said better, haha. About the story itself, I can't really complain. For some reason, I was never on team Tim. I was totally ready to rule out Chase (and super disappointed about it) until the end of this chapter. I guess, too much negative stuff has happened with Tim in such a short amount of time that a part of me is able to hold onto the hope that he wont be endgame for her... but I know that's wishful thinking on my part and that he obviously means a lot to her if he's been able to hurt her so much in that short span of time. And even though I should know by now that things never go my way in these stories, I'm hoping for friendship to give way to someone more between Chase and Liz in the future. Also, I'm totally crushing on Matt and Ashley (even though I'm completely against cheating) and I hope to see more of them soon! PS- Sorry for this huge rant! |
![]() ![]() ![]() omfg! honestly, I was not expecting that! I thought maybe he had a relationship with Diana prior to Liz, but not...during. Lol. I think this is my favorite chapter. You AND this chapter are amazing! haha. keep upating...soon!...please... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Tsk tsk Tim! I love the drama :-) Time for a bit more Chase action? |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh my...so much drama! tim and liz are so dysfunctional. ] my heart still belongs to chase, i must say. update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() i kind of think ashley is a bitch for doing that, but to each her own, i suppose. was matt married to amanda? i can't remember. hmm, i don't really like tim either. i think chace would be a much better fit, but i can't wait to see how you make this work. update soon! |