Reviews for Suicide Squeeze
CLocKRabBiT chapter 9 . 6/16/2010
Hmm. Not a huge cliffhanger here. I still like Tim, lots and lots. xD

I wish you would work a little more on Chace's back story, I want to know more about him and his friendship with Alexei. Also, what about Matt?

I think I know what happened. I think it's because I read too much and I'm the goddess of the obscure knowledge (wth did I just wrote?).

Please, forgive my incongruent thoughts and crazy ramblings. It's late, I'm sleepy, I have work tomorrow and I'm addicted to your stories.

PS.: I love your dialogs!
CLocKRabBiT chapter 5 . 6/16/2010
First, sorry about getting Chace's name wrong the first time. LOL. He's cute but, I don't know how or why, I pick TIM (Even if he turns out to be bald). k. Also, I like Liz's attitude, I can relate with her somehow.
CLocKRabBiT chapter 4 . 6/16/2010
oh my gawd! So funny how you plotted their encounter and how Tim fitted right in. k.

I truly can't decide who I'm going to cheer for. o.o Tim or Chance? Ah. So hard to choose. Maybe, if you tell me that beneath that hat Tim is bald... Am I being prejudiced?
Caroline202 chapter 9 . 6/16/2010
I seriously don't know why this story doesn't have more reviews, it's fantastic! I love the realism of the characters and their feelings, you've done a great job!

Hope you update again soon, i love seeing the update email for this story :-)
Autumn chapter 9 . 6/16/2010
I am enjoying your story! Chace seems like an absolute sweetheart and I'm rooting for Liz to end up with him. Tim just has too much baggage and needs to work out his issues before attempting a relationship.
ctolhouse chapter 8 . 6/8/2010
So it usually takes me a lot of chapters to really get into a story . . . to figure out how I feel about it. I like Chace already (I heart baseball stories), but I don't know about Tim or even Liz. I'm gearing up for the inevitable love triangle where Liz is going to make a lot of mistakes and drama will follow drama. Should be fun.
Guest chapter 7 . 6/7/2010
So, I'm not sure why this story doesn't have twice the number of reviews it currently has. It's evidenced by my staying up till 2 am to read it.

I'm really liking the main character and the guys in her life. It's sure to get pretty complicated though, more than it already has. But that's what keeps things interesting.

Can't wait to read the next chapter!

P.S. It's pretty funny how I could especially identify with Liz, seeing as I'm on the job hunt, fresh out of college. And I have to say, it's particularly hard to find good fiction about characters my age. So this story is very refreshing.
ramenrandomness chapter 1 . 5/30/2010
Love this, am going straight to read the rest of your pcs!

Hm, would it be too greedy to wish that she'd have a fling with Chace but end up marrying Tim 6 yrs from now? haha
gulistala chapter 6 . 5/25/2010
Okay, I really hope she doesn't develop 'selective amnesia' as Tim put it. But judging by her outburst I think that's the way it's going to go, eh? Oh noes! I wonder what Chace'll think. ;D

Keep up the good work!
blurrylights chapter 6 . 5/23/2010
'"You promise I'm not a giant slut?" Liz asked Ashley as she snuggled under the blankets on the couch she was crashing on.'

-I laughed out loud at that one. ]

xoxInnerHollowxox chapter 6 . 5/23/2010
this story is awesome so far..please update soon!
xoxInnerHollowxox chapter 5 . 5/23/2010
great chapter
xoxInnerHollowxox chapter 4 . 5/23/2010
this is great, I love the guys xD
xoxInnerHollowxox chapter 3 . 5/23/2010
cant wait to read more!
xoxInnerHollowxox chapter 2 . 5/23/2010
this was awesome, im really enjoying this story
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