Reviews for Voice of a Maiden
Dramira chapter 1 . 1/15/2011
Lovely piece. My favorite is the first verse, actually, hehe.
C. Tattiana H-H chapter 1 . 11/27/2010
I really like how you formatted this piece. It gave it structure and created a nice rhythm. I found some of the rhymes to be too simple for my taste. I think you could have been a bit more creative with them in order to make it engaging. Nonetheless, I appreciate the dedication and think this was a good piece overall. :)

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Princess-anna57 chapter 1 . 11/12/2010
Once again, great song, great opening especially. In the chorus where you say "I know that your worrying/I know that your hurting" the two "your" should be "you're". But besides that, awesome job. Write on!

Anna _
Ciaran Mordecai chapter 1 . 10/31/2010
So so pretty Canine makes me sad but it was so great and i love it! :) need to read your stories more