i love it! Can't wait for more, i really liked the backstory :)

d'aw this story seems hellaa cute lol update soon plz? :)

Here's a little treat for you sweetie, I said I would review this story if you updated your 'Tokyo' story in a week, so here's a preview of what I will do.

I really enjoyed this first chapter! I hope there are more.

My favorite point of this story is the fact that you leading lady is a voluptuous Latina, just like me (Well, I'm 1/4 Latino, 1/2 native American, and 1/4 Caucasian) not some rail thin girl that starves herself to death! If a woman is skinny naturally it's beautiful, if she has to starve herself to be that way it's just wrong! I mean what is society coming to now a days!

Here is the only mistake I found:

-'This was evident by her large breasts and cleavage, which were mere inches away from his face.- 'breasts and cleavage' you need to chose one or the other- breasts or cleavage; your chose- because if you have both breasts and cleavage it sounds kinda' redundant.

Okay, update soon!

Sincerely,

Emerson-Rae

P.S. I am in love with Dr. Reid too! Oh my fucking god, I think you are my soul mate! I also like Morgan, do you?

awesome stuff and thank you for the shout out... the falling scene totally made me think of an anime scene! lol it was just missing the giant sweatdrop haha... good stuff tho :) i'll be checking back for more for sure