Reviews for 1:13 AM
4everclueless chapter 1 . 8/8/2010
-shivers-

Woah. Maybe it's because I'm reading this at 1:58 am, or maybe it's just cause your writing is fucking awesome. Yeesh, the shit you write gives me chills. Keep up the awesome work.
speakeasy-love chapter 1 . 4/30/2010
very heavy piece, and extremely well written.

i like the way you list dissimilar things.

"Tell me I'm violent,

Tell me I'm lovely"

great job.
Avisax chapter 1 . 4/28/2010
It's good!

It seems to me with the right tune, it could easily become a Linkin Park song!

The only thing is:

There are a few mistakes like: "With a gut gull of posion" and "A backstabbed".

But then again, why proofread your emotions?