Reviews for Click
Avery H chapter 9 . 10/26/2011
I will always love these updates.
backtodecember chapter 7 . 1/27/2011
"I'm moving forward going nowhere," this line struck me as the one I can relate to quite a bit. It's so- good, so, it seems lately, a more common feeling than ever before.
backtodecember chapter 4 . 1/27/2011
This one has some great imagery in so few words, in so few overly descriptive words, and in truth that I am a bit jealous of.
backtodecember chapter 1 . 1/27/2011
This is, for lack of a better word, deep. I can very well relate to this.
Averick chapter 1 . 11/26/2010
Hmm...I've read this before, and I swear I thought I reviewed it...but apparently not? Strange. Lol anyway, this review is for the entire thing, since I've read it before, hehe ;) Anywho, it's great. I like the whole 'click' thing and how deep this seems to be. So congrats! Nicely done!
NearlyPrescient chapter 1 . 9/23/2010
a very interesting premise. I really like the use of click for framing and breaking up the thoughts.

a tight, excellent piece
Laugh With Rage chapter 5 . 8/11/2010
Amazing. I loved the whole thing. I really enjoyed how the chapters were so separate, but seemed to fit together anyway. The ending was my favorite.
xxxoblivion chapter 5 . 8/11/2010
For some strange reason, while I read this I kept thinking that the 'click's and the 'bang's were a gun in a game of Russian Roulette.

Anyways, I like this. A lot. All the poems had this little meaning behind them.
Averick chapter 5 . 8/11/2010
Awesome! I don't usually read poetry (even though I write it sometimes) but I liked this. It seemed to speak to me somehow, haha, and I liked that you put 'click' in there, and'bang', and even cut off the words like 'cli-' and 'BA-'. I like it!
tindulce chapter 1 . 6/26/2010
I like the way you wrote this poem. Sad yet true. :)
Dusk Howler chapter 3 . 5/19/2010
i can't even begin to say what i want to. i feel like you're growing more and more distant away from me...i need you. your son needs you...we both need you. please don't be thinking this shit...you are worth so, so much more than that...
Dusk Howler chapter 2 . 5/19/2010
you can't hear the bang. you're dead.
HiddenFromYou chapter 3 . 5/14/2010
This was really good and powerful. Am I right in thinking the 'click' was him pulling the trigger and no bullet being in the chamber?
Tronix chapter 1 . 5/5/2010
Russian roulette without bullets? I don't know if this was meant to be funny or not, but it sounds hilarious, assuming its a six shooter. Six clicks means he ran out of bullets. Good one. And my utmost apologizes if im putting my foot in my mouth.
Archia chapter 1 . 5/4/2010
This is really sad, meaningful and true for a lot of people. And that is what makes it beautiful.
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