I hope to see you continue this story.

I don't know where even to begin... But I suppose I can start with how I love this story /so/ much! A very epic read, and I was shocked that it didn't have a hundred reviews yet. Very well written and I love how you mixed two religions. The plot is really starting to pick up now and I'm anxious to see how it turns out! :D

this story is really good! i love the idea i'm actually kina jealous :P hope you write more x

love you x

I continue to enjoy your story. I eagerly await to read the true mission of the angels. Chapter 6: Marketplace is by far my favorite so-far.

This is turning to be very intruiging _

Im waiting in suspense for a tragedy to hit

Again, you never fail to impress me.

Your mastery of suspense is actually quite amazing.

I dont see a plot yet, but Ill be waiting

Keep on writing :D

:D

A love story is coming )

Im getting the feeling it ends tragically.

Have fun playing with your little universe :D

Another exelently wrought chapter :D

Keep up the good work )

Another review for the Review Marathon. My last one, actually. I'm done, finished. And although it hardly matters at this time, as the marathon ends in four hours and the information thread is down, the rules require me to have a link to it on my profile here: /u/6919/Cole_Culain

good, a chapter in which Atlas can finally be fleshed out as a character. I am glad you introduced his godly powers and did so in a way that was not a list. It also gives me a certain satisfaction that his powers are mostly physical, like an amped-up human being, in both physical and mental strength. I am also glad Atlas is portrayed not just as muscle, but muscle with brains. This makes him a much better character, and more likable, too.

My comments on this chapter though, are less than cheery. I'm afraid I found this chapter a bit too filler-y. This seemed like a place for character development alone, and could have been much better done in a chapter with significance to the plot. I'm sorry if that seems a little harsh, but those are my thoughts on the matter. After reading the previous three chapters, I feel as though this one is not your best work... I'm sorry.

HOWEVER! Despite the fact that the Marathon is ending, I wish to continue to read this story. It has a lot of good to it, and I am interested to see how it all turns out. Best of luck to you, Atlas Aztlan.

Yet another review for the review marathon. I'll be honest. I'm getting tired of typing this heading. But regardless of how I feel, the info is still posted on my profile: /u/6919/Cole_Culain

I feel it's time I comment on your writing style. I've read three of the four chapters, so I feel like I've found the consistency of it. I like it, however, you make your paragraphs very short, only a few lines each. This is not necessarily a bad thing, but it can get confusing occasionally. Just a heads up, I suppose. Oh, and for future reference, four years of religion class have drilled into my skull that God (capital G) is reserved for 'the' God, while god (little g) is used to describe any other gods, especially in the plural. Although I take it more at a grammatical standpoint than a theological one...

The plot of this story is something very interesting indeed. A titan who must reunite all the old gods under the new God, for reasons yet unknown. I love the style it is written, the voice and the way the events are moving. Great job here, and best of luck in the future.

Another review for the Review Marathon. Link found on profile: /u/6919/Cole_Culain

Wow, another awesome chapter. This was a good way to write it, I think. Modern times first, to see what the gods were doing in our age, and then the freedom of Atlas from his punishment. I'm impressed you were able to pull this off, because it's something I really struggle with doing. Kudos.

I also like the description used here. A reader can really picture the agony Atlas faced every waking moment. You really captured his emotions, and that is something worth applauding in anyone.

Hey, one review for the review marathon. The thread is down at the time of my writing, but if it ever come up again, details can be found via link on my profile here: /u/6919/Cole_Culain

Wow, cool story, and awesome concept. I really like how 'human' you made the characters, with human desires, wants and, most importantly, emotions. Ramiel is just a great character, I'm almost mad at you that you came up with him before I did. He seems like a mellow, rule abiding version of the Lucifer I came up with for my story Cain.

The setting is a good one, if a bit common and cliched for modern mythology stories. But I like that you moved beyond the single pantheon of gods (strictly Greco-roman, Norse, Japanese, Hindu, etc.) and made them all a part of the world. Kind of reminds me of that series of books about Nicholas Flamel.

Awesome story, can't wait to read the next few chapters!

This was a really brilliant chapter _

The idea of multiple Gods intruiges me.

I wonder how devastating to Earth an inter-God war would be

I really love the story you are weaving

Very good! I like the concept, and will be very interested in seeing how you move forward with it. Giving each sentence it's own paragraph threw me off a bit, don't know how I feel about those, but I think this is a great idea for a story and you're off to a great start. Looking forward to reading more!

I like it. I really like it. I've always been a sucker for mythology. The whole idea of the Greek gods clashing with God is an excellent idea and your use as Atlas as a main character was very unexpected. I do have only one criticism so far. When speaking of the Greek gods it is not really necessary to capitalize them though I can not say that it is really wrong. In either case, I only mention this because it is a story in which you will obviously be referring to the Christian God as well and it is apt to cause much confusion. This is only a suggestion. I am going to Favorite your story and look forward to future installments.