Reviews for it was massive
electrical moon chapter 1 . 4/1/2012
Lovely poem! I really enjoyed the ending.
Faithless Juliet chapter 1 . 4/30/2010
I loved the otherworldly notion of the city sinking, that wad such a striking image for me. It was fantastically wonderful. The whole poem had an air of nostalgia, and a lot of pride. I got the sense that the writer wasn't devistated by the loss, but rather seeking answers. Keep up the good work.

Much love,

Juliet.