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for shame chapter 1 . 5/4/2010
interesting rhyme.

you're like dr seuss, but

on all sorts of drugs that

turn red fish and blue fish

into little deviants who

sleep around and have twin

fantasies. if that makes sense.
wayfaringstrangers chapter 1 . 4/30/2010
I love the rhyme scheme, :)

Reminds me of childhood innocence (contradictory to the actual poem).