|Reviews for The Fall|
| Lacrymosa string-quartet chapter 1 . 5/6/2010
Dude, i think Ace has some issue with dead people because that insane smile really creep me out... than again I can't blame the guy, I laugh or sometime giggle when someone get hurt or get torture (that's only when they deserve it) I just can't resist the enjoyment of seeing their pain ... oh wait! Back to your story, I really enjoy it, even though Ace acted weird, maybe it was the beer that made him lose his mind.
Reason: Good description, fine detail about the character's reason, short yet interesting, and good grammar.
I'm not going to tell you what you lack because there weren't that many, just the positive stuff _.
Overall: Great _