Reviews for Pretending
Ashlee Pond chapter 9 . 1/6/2011
Aw I just love it!

I can't even put it into words.

It's always the real life stuff that resonates the best.

I'm so glad you're back, and I'm so sorry that it's taken me so long to review!

Please continue. :)
Ashlee Pond chapter 8 . 8/3/2010
Oh Darling!

You're so amazing. I can't even put into words how much I love this insight into your life. Especially the summary; every time I see that in my e-mails, my heart just skips a beat.

That's alright.. I will keep my eye on it, not that that's hard, as both you and this story are on my alerts list.

But you do what feels right. )

This boy does sound confusing, a bit all over the place with his relationships and his actions.

I wish you the best of luck!

& of course I'll keep reading your other works. D
Ashlee Pond chapter 7 . 7/13/2010
I hope that this isn't over, because I do love it.

But it's good that you feel as though you're moving on.
Ashlee Pond chapter 6 . 6/25/2010
I just adore your style of writing.

I hope things work out before your birthday.
Ashlee Pond chapter 5 . 6/18/2010


i hope you're okay.
Ashlee Pond chapter 4 . 6/9/2010
It's such a tragic situation. I know how you feel.
Ashlee Pond chapter 3 . 5/26/2010
It's such a frustrating situation..

Please continue.
Ashlee Pond chapter 2 . 5/26/2010
Very poignant.

The anger clearly comes across.
Ashlee Pond chapter 1 . 5/26/2010
It was the summary that drew me into your story; good work on that, a lot of the summaries on fp are just crap, to be brutally honest.

I really love this style of writing, and you're doing a great job of portraying the narrator's feelings and the situation.

You said that you're 'not good at this commitment thing'. I'm the exact same, so I can empathise with you on that. But that's why I love this short and sweet chapter style, it's easy to keep motivated and updating.

Overall, I adore it so far, and I am definitely going to keep reading.