Reviews for atonement
SilentVoices chapter 1 . 5/5/2010
I liked your use of alliteration with the 'dusty,' 'devoured,' and 'dark.' Very good piece. :)
no.peace.los.angeles chapter 1 . 5/1/2010
Interesting. Definitely does have mystery to it. I like the use of "devoured" here. Very nice. Keep writing! :)
nickyO chapter 1 . 5/1/2010
Ok, I'm fast becoming a fan of your work. Interesting to contemplate.
Faithless Juliet chapter 1 . 5/1/2010
I liked your use of stump, it makes me think of older, darker things. Good word choice overall though.

Juliet.