|Reviews for You're Probably More Fun without a Shirt|
| Inconsequential chapter 8 . 7/25/2012
No problem :) I'm probably wasting my review by telling you it's no problem, but it's no problem! I'm totally looking forward to more updates from you xD
| Inconsequential chapter 7 . 7/25/2012
Oh my gosh! Poor Jonah and his grandpa! And Lita really is evil! She's like the Simpson's Mr. Burns, Star Wars' Darth Vader and Harry Potter's Voldemort in one female package!
Oh no, I must read on! I hope Sco won't get hurt! :O
| Inconsequential chapter 6 . 7/25/2012
Ooh, looks like Jonah's a guy with a hidden past, huh? Cool! I can't wait to read on and uncover his secrets!
As for the questions (my answers probably don't matter because I'm reading this so late but):
2. I totally think he's been faking the whole time...
3. Maybe his brother and he have a very bad relationship and Jonah's just real sad about it...
4. I have two theories; he used to steal girlfriends or he was a juvenile kid.
Chapter seven, here I come!
| Inconsequential chapter 5 . 7/25/2012
I honestly cannot get over how well you write. You're stories sound like you've spend weeks building the characters, the scenes, the plots and histories! It really sounds like you do a lot to please your readers and for that I'm thankful :) Do not discontinue this lovely piece of work xDDD
| Inconsequential chapter 4 . 7/25/2012
Carsten likes her! Oh my gosh! Ha ha, you sure know some great ways to introduce love confessions, ha ha :) Oh wow, the story just got a lot more interesting!
| Inconsequential chapter 3 . 7/25/2012
Ha ha, what a lovely band indeed! I love your story writing skills :) Ha ha, and I have a brother exactly like Pete, lol. It's so interesting ;)
| Inconsequential chapter 2 . 7/25/2012
This is such a cool story :)
I can totally relate to the main character, ha ha :D
| DianaSweetie chapter 8 . 1/16/2012
A very Sad Moment in Life .. D:
Every Fan hates It when This Happens .. its Devastating.
I hope Its up Soon Though. :D
| DianaSweetie chapter 7 . 1/16/2012
Whoa .. im Baffled !
suddenly i dont know who anyone is anymore ! LOL
Lita is a bitch and Jonah is Confusing as hell, not to mention, hes working with Lita now ? Holy cow ! xD
| DianaSweetie chapter 4 . 1/16/2012
Carsten sounds just as Hot as Jonah .. Not sure what team im going for .. ? :o
| DianaSweetie chapter 2 . 1/16/2012
This should be interesting ...
btw pete and jacob are Hilarious !
| DianaSweetie chapter 1 . 1/15/2012
Fornicate? Wow, i wasn't expecting that .. well i was. The summary gave it away, but it still got to me! XD
Dude i just LOVE your stories, If you ever make it big i will Buy Your Every Single Book and read them Over and Over again ! You're just that Good!
| Amber chapter 2 . 12/18/2011
so far really funny, interesting plot, and great grammar!
only two things- could have been a little more subtle in giving us a description of what she looks like (sorta made the entire thing seem.. more childish?) and when her brother started with "i named mines little pete" mines.. I thought he was like 4 and was extremely confused
anyway thank you!
| Ana3498 chapter 8 . 4/27/2011
Finally, COMMENT TIME! Sorry, but I was keeping notes of everything I would tell you in this review, that's why I'm so excited! Okay, so first of all, Team Jonah all the way! I don't know, I just have a thing for his mysterious qualities. Next up is some character critique. No offence, but you used the some same characters from 'Dear Moron'. Josco and Mera have the exact same description: hazel eyes and long and curly dark hair. So do Jonah and Jace: dark blue eyes, muscular build, and curly dark hair that goes just beyond their ears. I think Carsten and Christian have identical personalities and I think Mera and Josco have similair families. Also, you used names from 'Dear Moron', too. There's a Jane and a Jacob in both stories. I don't know why, but I just think its horrible if your readers think of another character when they are reading a totally different story. I don't know, I just think that every character should be their own and unique. Also, I think you use J names too muceh. EX.: Jace, Johnathan, Jonah, Jane, Josco, Jacob... I know...I'm so picky! And sorry if I'm criticizing you too harshly, I really don't mean too, I'm just trying to give you constructive criticm. Oh, and lastly, you seriously need someone to edit your chapters! Punctuation and grammatical errors are my biggest pet peeve, and I try to overlook them, but I just can't stop obsessing because I'm a freak like that. Just please, work on it? For me? On the bright side, I think the band and the two guys in love with her thing and all that good shit is amazing! It's a really good story and I'd probably love it if I wasn't such a Grammar Nazi and if 'Dear Moron' hadn't already stolen my heart! Write more, though I'd prefer you'd update my favorite story ever first! :D
| ChrisDrewRocksMyWorld124 chapter 8 . 4/16/2011
No! I loved this story so much and its blunt raunchiness. Gah, please hurry and write more. ( I know I'm selfish)