Reviews for Forever Ends
Lee Daniel chapter 1 . 10/9/2010
You know, sometimes it seems as if you have reached into my soul and written about my own life. So moving and easy to connect with. Yes, it is sad that everything ends. Even forever. When it does, it can be so incredibly hard to let go of somebody you love dearly even if you know it simply cannot be.
D. Ein chapter 1 . 5/1/2010
I would like to see his point of view of this relationship. You say that you are the one to blame for "everything that's happened", but... it seems that you are not really sorry about it. This is a wonderful piece of work, both in terms of craftsmanship and the insight it offers into the relationship you ended. My apologies if this review seems a little on the cross side - I've just suffered a similar event in my life, and I find myself disturbingly connecting with the poem.