Wow! This was super creepy! I loved it!

GAWD i love this soooooooooo much!

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE continue this... pretty pretty please

Can you make ... you know, like a sequel? It's really cool, and seems unfair to Mike suffer all of that... PLEASE!

Can you add to this a bit more and give it a better ending

you should make this into a movie it's that good

the story was good but it could use a better ending

I really like this little short! It was very good!

Please please PLEASE! Write a sequel to this! My mind is buzzing with curioisity about what will happen with Mike! Awesome story, btw!

Please continue this story. I get that Mike does not survive the birth, but maybe you can write it so that the cat was being malicious and lying about Rachael being born again as full adult, because - OUCH! What if the initial swelling stops, reduces and then he is actually only one month pregnant. That way he can live through it. Make the cat male, animagus so he and Mike end up in a relationship. I likke this story. You can do a lot of fun things with it.

This was so horrible. I feel so sorry for him.

Great writing, though. Really great, but sad.

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