Reviews for Bedlam, Inc
OddlyEmotional chapter 1 . 3/20/2016
Great story
Guest chapter 1 . 3/17/2016
I'll get back to it she says. Don't worry she says. Five years later and I'm still sitting here like "Don't worry she'll be back" and the voice in the back of my head is like "Nahhh, she's done."

Awesome story my lovely come back to it one day!
LostInPie chapter 12 . 8/30/2013
It's not too late to continue this! please please please don't forget about this story! your writing is so good and the characters so lovable! xx
HarderToBreathe chapter 12 . 12/23/2012
Please please please update! I love Tanner and Laybey together. They're so cute, I love the humor you put into the dialogue and descriptions.

I'm a new fan and I'm just so excited to see what happens next. It's been one year since you last updated. :( Please give us something here! I just love your story. Please be a doll and spoil your readers after a very long absence. :p
karo chapter 13 . 9/28/2012
Can't hardly wait for what's next! Pleeeaseeee update!
FamishedNight chapter 13 . 6/12/2012
Awesome story! Update soon!
darkgurl92 chapter 13 . 5/19/2012
This is getting so good..i hope u update soon. can't wait to read more about Layney and tanner.
CrazyCowgirl101 chapter 13 . 3/19/2012
Nooooooooooo! :( I'm so sad now! You have to update! But, I understand how you're feeling! I'm having a hard time balancing school home life and writing as well. Please update soon!
Castor.Leigh chapter 13 . 12/26/2011
So I know you've put this on hiatus a while ago

and I know it's been ages since you've updated.

But I'm hoping that maybe as a hooked reader, and fan of this story (even if I hadn't been reviewing) it would remind you that this story is well loved. And maybe it might help to motivate you to push out a another chapter out, now that the holidays are through.

I really love this tale it's so well written and the characters are awesome. I would love to be able to read another chapter. It would be like getting that awesome late Christmas gift from an eccentric aunt; who, gets great gifts but doesn't operate on a calender schedule. So please be like an eccentric aunt, and please update! Also good luck with school, and happy writing.
Sheryl chapter 13 . 11/20/2011
NOOO! THIS CANT BE ON HIATUS! IT CANT IT CANT IT CANT! *ahem* Anyway, just wanna say that this story is just amazing and [although i do not know if this will happen] I'm waiting for the time where Tanner and Layney gets...very close and then something happens and she forgets Tanner and its just so freaking ironic because in the beginning Tanner wanted her to forget...i'm rambling...yeah...UPDATE! Your writing is superb and I cant wait for the next chapter! *bookmarks*
applenica chapter 13 . 10/13/2011
hiii! i'm your new reader. i just found your story and i read it all the way..so sad that you put it in hiatus. i hope you will be back updating because i love layney and tanner together. will tanner be a good husband and change to be a good guy? wonder how they will survive a day together in the same house for the rest of their life hhiihi. update soon _
Lily chapter 12 . 10/10/2011
This was just the fictionpress I've been searching for! Please, please update at some point!
Black Winged Cat chapter 8 . 10/9/2011
i'll be honest. The end...terrible.

You start alright with the bar and everything, but you just suddenly jump in with an odd stranger who came out of no where without any explantion. This should be wrote to make more sense. Seriously.

but really good book up till now
BlueMoonlily chapter 7 . 10/7/2011
I'm confused with their personalities, is tanner really a gentleman? Is layney really smart but has other aspects? Idk she doesn't seem sweet anymore because she's always thinking mean stuff about tanner. Also I thought this was the second day they were in London not a week? And I don't really like Ashley . and what did you hint at about layney's father? And why are they having their honeymoon in June when the wedding is in the fall? Other than those things I like the story so far :)
BlueMoonlily chapter 5 . 10/7/2011
Hey n.n I've been sick for the past few days so I've been reading a lot and I found your story today and so far I like it but I'm still waiting for more of the plot. I mean she can't just leave like that and what's niki thinking! I hope these questions get answered! : D I'm excited to keep reading :)
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