Reviews for Bedlam, Inc |
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![]() ![]() I'll get back to it she says. Don't worry she says. Five years later and I'm still sitting here like "Don't worry she'll be back" and the voice in the back of my head is like "Nahhh, she's done." Awesome story my lovely come back to it one day! |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's not too late to continue this! please please please don't forget about this story! your writing is so good and the characters so lovable! xx |
![]() ![]() Please please please update! I love Tanner and Laybey together. They're so cute, I love the humor you put into the dialogue and descriptions. I'm a new fan and I'm just so excited to see what happens next. It's been one year since you last updated. :( Please give us something here! I just love your story. Please be a doll and spoil your readers after a very long absence. :p |
![]() ![]() Can't hardly wait for what's next! Pleeeaseeee update! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome story! Update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is getting so good..i hope u update soon. can't wait to read more about Layney and tanner. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nooooooooooo! :( I'm so sad now! You have to update! But, I understand how you're feeling! I'm having a hard time balancing school home life and writing as well. Please update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() So I know you've put this on hiatus a while ago and I know it's been ages since you've updated. But I'm hoping that maybe as a hooked reader, and fan of this story (even if I hadn't been reviewing) it would remind you that this story is well loved. And maybe it might help to motivate you to push out a another chapter out, now that the holidays are through. I really love this tale it's so well written and the characters are awesome. I would love to be able to read another chapter. It would be like getting that awesome late Christmas gift from an eccentric aunt; who, gets great gifts but doesn't operate on a calender schedule. So please be like an eccentric aunt, and please update! Also good luck with school, and happy writing. |
![]() ![]() NOOO! THIS CANT BE ON HIATUS! IT CANT IT CANT IT CANT! *ahem* Anyway, just wanna say that this story is just amazing and [although i do not know if this will happen] I'm waiting for the time where Tanner and Layney gets...very close and then something happens and she forgets Tanner and its just so freaking ironic because in the beginning Tanner wanted her to forget...i'm rambling...yeah...UPDATE! Your writing is superb and I cant wait for the next chapter! *bookmarks* |
![]() ![]() ![]() hiii! i'm your new reader. i just found your story and i read it all the way..so sad that you put it in hiatus. i hope you will be back updating because i love layney and tanner together. will tanner be a good husband and change to be a good guy? wonder how they will survive a day together in the same house for the rest of their life hhiihi. update soon _ |
![]() ![]() This was just the fictionpress I've been searching for! Please, please update at some point! |
![]() ![]() ![]() i'll be honest. The end...terrible. You start alright with the bar and everything, but you just suddenly jump in with an odd stranger who came out of no where without any explantion. This should be wrote to make more sense. Seriously. but really good book up till now |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm confused with their personalities, is tanner really a gentleman? Is layney really smart but has other aspects? Idk she doesn't seem sweet anymore because she's always thinking mean stuff about tanner. Also I thought this was the second day they were in London not a week? And I don't really like Ashley . and what did you hint at about layney's father? And why are they having their honeymoon in June when the wedding is in the fall? Other than those things I like the story so far :) |