Reviews for Tight Fit
Hopeless Romantic Writer chapter 1 . 8/1/2010
It's great! You're an awesome writer.
Moony08 chapter 1 . 7/12/2010
Hey, nice start!

I get the feeling you like describing the way the characters look, but you've done it realy godd!


I like the title 'Tight Fit'

Great job! Continue, okay?

Hey, um, just check up on your grammar a bit, but other than that, brilliant.


And do read my stories when you have the time!

XxCaptainKoalaxX chapter 4 . 7/9/2010
I like your story... I expected something like that to happen... Hope you can update soon:)
HeyyyitsPickle chapter 4 . 6/22/2010
Hello! you asked for a review, so here it goes. i honestly did like it. but i was slightly confused. Why did she decide to stay at his house?and stay in his bed? I'm pretty sure there were guestrooms. Haha. But I'm just questioning those. There weren't any grammar mistakes or any great confusion. So you're good :)
raycel44 chapter 1 . 6/22/2010
haha that was cute! I'll definitely read more of this story. hope u can read and review my stories too
pandakim chapter 4 . 6/18/2010
omg! i cant wait to read more! and btw... i LOVE One more sad song by All American Rejects! Keep rockin'

-pandakim ;]
ayra chapter 3 . 5/19/2010
Great story UPDATE SON!
EliMerriman chapter 3 . 5/6/2010
Well, the tense problem has been fixed! I think that, from this point, the best you can do is practice the rules of writing you know, allow them to become second-nature, and work on word choice (not that your word choice is horrible, but everyone can always work on that).

I do have a slight problem with the realism of the plot, and find such plots to be too "teenage" for lack of a better word, but I cannot call it an ineffective plot as it seems to be much liked by others. I still think that a little more plot development could be done, though, which would probably help with the realism of the situation.

I do like Heather's fear of being confined by others, however, and it makes a nice theme for such situations. Also, the fact that she does so much as she pleases (particularly just staying at some random guy's house for absolutely no apparent reason) says something about her home life. I think. The last time that I noticed something about a character due to their actions, I turned out to be dead wrong.

Anyway, much improvement, and more to come I hope. also, sorry for the belated review, I had to study for an AP exam all of yesterday.
Floppy125 chapter 3 . 5/5/2010
great beginning! please update ASAP
Dead Deactivated chapter 3 . 5/5/2010
Seeing my name on your chappie made me happy :D Update soon!
writer-person-thingy chapter 3 . 5/5/2010

Lol, I loved this chapter! I really like Heather's character-Reese's too. They're both really cool, and I can totally see something forming there! Keep up the great work! :D
cndysweetmss chapter 1 . 5/5/2010
Great story :D
Clover-101 chapter 2 . 5/3/2010
Good story :)
writer-person-thingy chapter 2 . 5/3/2010
aw, poor heather. i feel so bad for her; puking on a guy twice. the same guy. i would be so mortified i'd puke (lol). but this is great, and you're definitely getting better! keep the story going! i wanna see where this goes! if you don't, i'll have to find out where you live and tickle you until you do! :D

lol, jk. but this is great, honestly! now you've got me wanting to start another story, lol! :D
writer-person-thingy chapter 1 . 5/3/2010
Hey-la! Am replying to your PM (too lazy to log in) and I want to say great job! Most of it was great; it leaves me with questions and anticipation! There were a few minor grammatical errors and I was a little shaky when you were talking about the hairstyling part, but I'm definitely intrigued! I do hope you keep going with this; I know I'll be checking it out and reviewing! :D
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