Reviews for Blink
Scarlet927 chapter 5 . 5/30/2010
i love this story. It's very original, creative, and well written. I hope to see more soon.
AlijaS117 chapter 5 . 5/29/2010
its really interesting please update soon!
Emma Ablaze chapter 5 . 5/29/2010
Thank you for actually writing a readable story. Maybe I'm just getting picky, but they're getting harder and harder to find on here. I love your concept, but I love lots of concepts. The difference is that yours is well executed, with a very interesting tone, and good diction. I also appreciate that you're not rushing the story. Good work.
Celianna Tinks chapter 5 . 5/29/2010
For some reason the numbers in my previous review got messed up. I didn't mean to say 10 and 50, I meant to say a thousand and five thousand.

Anyways, this chapter was very dramatic. I love the way you were able to install the image of rape (or just sexual abuse) in our minds without actually describing anything to us about the scene. Sol seems very in charge and I like the way you portrayed her.

I can't wait to read the chapter where Sol and Colin meet.
F chapter 5 . 5/28/2010
Excellent idea for a story :)
cheveux roux chapter 4 . 5/23/2010
Very riveting! Can't wait until the next chapter, this was a spectacular one!
Celianna Tinks chapter 4 . 5/23/2010
So they finally meet! I'm curious about their encounter with each other.

I am a bit disappointed that this chapter was so very short. I like to read chapters that are over 50 words long (long enough for several things to happen), while you only have about a 10 words and only 2 things really happen. Try to make them longer next time :)
cheveux roux chapter 2 . 5/23/2010
Again, another lovable character! I love all the comic book references and Colin's background information. Can't wait to read the next few chapters!
cheveux roux chapter 1 . 5/23/2010
I'm already in love with this story! I like how Sol is reminiscent of "Matilda" and "The Secret Garden," but it isn't exact like it. There are too many authors here that re-use old story lines, and thankfully you have a unique one! The suspense is definitely going to keep me reading.
AlijaS117 chapter 4 . 5/23/2010
this is really good please update soon!
Celianna Tinks chapter 3 . 5/21/2010
I've got to say this story is very easy to read, and the sentences flow very nicely. With the exception that you seem to start a lot of sentences with 'But', your grammar is top-notch.

I already really like both Sol and Colin. They're both little kids being pushed into a corner where they'll get stomped on, but soon I'm pretty sure they'll start using their powers to become a better person themselves.

I'm looking forward to read more about this. Keep writing.
archiche chapter 2 . 5/14/2010
Wow. I really love this so far! The characters and the style and the concept... I just adore it :) I've got a superhero-fic or two waiting in my head, but I'm not sure I could pull it off as well as you are so far :P

Can't wait for an update _ Good luck!
Sharpie Harpie chapter 1 . 5/2/2010
I love Sol already. She seems like a...Sassy little kid. xD And her grandma sounds like mine. Haha.

Definitely keep writing this.
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