Reviews for Weightless
Isca chapter 1 . 5/2/2010
"The gentle sigh of a heart." I love the tone of this line; it's angsty, yet terribly beautiful.

"It ceases to be captured by a cage of bone." I love the empowerment here; the heart that's no longer constrained - that's very powerful!

"Did no one tell her how unattractive it is to have a gaping hole in her breast?" Ahaha. I love the comedic tone of this line; it's perfect & is a nice break from the 'pain' prominent in the rest of the poem.

"All she ever wanted was to be unshackled." How Promethean. I like it. This was a great poem by you. Keep up the good work. :)
Peachesandcream15 chapter 1 . 5/2/2010
The line "Silver-lined mushroom cloud of love" is just about one of my favourite ever images, really clever.

Alex xx