Reviews for Midnight Melody
LoveAntiquity chapter 5 . 5/9/2016
Hi Penelope, I couldn't resist coming back and rereading some of your work. Still love it! Is there any chance you'll pick up Midnight Melody again? Or maybe that you've finished it and had it published? I'd love to know what happens to Mel and Devin, I was always fascinated by their interactions and budding romance. I hope being plagiarized hasn't stopped you from writing, at the very least for yourself.
May life be treating you kindly.
Best wishes,
Lara
Jade chapter 1 . 2/9/2015
I MISS YOU PENELOPE P! COME BACK!
Guest chapter 5 . 11/12/2014
This is a great story, great chracters developement, and awesome writing style. I am Guidry for more!
Pseudonym59 chapter 5 . 8/13/2014
I know I praised this before, but you write some of the best characters I've read. Their individuality and chemistry with one another is so realistic of real people - the imperfections, the fights, the everything.
Pseudonym59 chapter 4 . 8/13/2014
I think Mel and Dev will be good for each other - two people who've been treated as broken their whole lives who just want to be trested like everyone else.
Pseudonym59 chapter 3 . 8/13/2014
I get the creeping feeling that Mel's going to relapse. :(
Pseudonym59 chapter 2 . 8/13/2014
I really love the universe you've created in this series. Each character is so well developed - nothing seems forced.

I can sense Mel's workload having an affect on her in the story.
Dawn28 chapter 5 . 8/10/2014
Hi! I absolutely love your stories, Sleeping with the Enemy & Rough Petals, and this story as well. Really looking forward to updates! :)
Guest chapter 5 . 11/2/2013
Why no more updates? Three years woman three years
jj chapter 5 . 2/16/2013
Is he really blind?
I read the title of ch 4 & thought that he isn't blind... Is he really blind?
This story gonna be more interesting.. Keep writting, penny!
Gabriela chapter 5 . 1/5/2013
Wow, I just found this and I'm already obsessed. Seriously, I'm so interested in this story. Even if you don't update it anymore, I think I'll be coming back often to re-read it-that's how much I like it (already).
Sarah Smith chapter 1 . 12/28/2012
Wow, your main characters are more developed in the first 2 chapters than some are in a whole story. You charters seem to come to life and hop off the pages and into your reader's minds. Keep it up you're fantastic.
rubberduckysabc chapter 3 . 12/27/2012
My mind is on a never ending loop and I can just see Mel and Devin's relationship playing out. I can tell you that it ends up being one of the most loving relationships. He takes care of her. He gives her attention and understands her feelings. Ahh I want him. I have him in my mind at lest. you're amazing of creating them. I just need more Devin he just captivates my attention.
rubberduckysabc chapter 1 . 12/27/2012
Your stories are just wonderful. I'm lost after finding out I've ran out of chapters to read. I need my Midnight Melody fix. You are an amazing writer. I can see your stories on book stands across America. You know you are reading a well written work when you find yourself lost in the words and they story is playing in your head. You envision the streets they walk on and the rooms they talk it. You forget things like grammar and sentence structure and just focus on the plot in your head. Stories are meant to be read this way and this is the way I feel when I read yours, especially Midnight Melody. Happy writing!
rubberduckysabc chapter 5 . 12/27/2012
Oh goodness Devin sounds wonderful. He's sweet and plays the piano and really cares about Mel. I have a feeling that this is going to be a favorite of mine. I hope he and Mel fall in love and have a magical time! Can't wait to read more!
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