I really liked your other stories, so I decided to read this one. Great chapter! you are a really good writer. I look foward to see how this story evolves.

You're story is so addicting! _ I can't stop reading! Gosh, the fire elementals are so mean!P Lucian had better hurry and save Sara! It's so sad how this story is coming to and end. Even when it's not a new Monday I still check for updates on other week days anyways because I'm like that and I love you and your stories. I've been waiting for new chapters since you've started this story and I can't wait for the last one! Update A.S.A.P! LucianXSara!

Argh! She was so close! Cant wait for the next chapter! :)

I love this story. A month haitus! Well if you really need one then sure, but I don't think I can last a whole month without your stories. Honestly. They're the reason I look forward to mondays.

You're an amazing writer!

I am trying to do my part to get you to 10 reviews. Dou you know I almost cried when I saw the ending; in terms of Sara being so shocked she couldn't do anything but watch. Also you know today is Tuesday right, I actually thought it was Monday and started getting angry that you hadn't updated, even though I read this chapter yesterday. How embarassing. I cannot wait for the next chapter, even though I know it's the last one, I am so going to miss the weekly updates.

Ahh that whole chapter i could literally feel panic rising in my chest for Sara, im so tense!

Do you mean, one chapter and an epilogue left? That would be pretty cool. But either way, I can't wait till next chapter. It sounds like it's going to be an awsome chapter if it's going to be the last one.

LOVE IT! Poor Sara, though. So close, yet to be cut off. Praying Lucian comes soon.

I cant wait for the next Series! I really love this story! My week isn't complete unless i read an update for one of your stories! Keep up the amazing work!

i cried when Abigail did all those things to Sara. God, and to believe that she said that Sara willalways be her best friend.

Loved it! Lol I even stayed up really late just to read it! Can't believe that this storynis almost

to an end! No epilogue then? Can't wait for keiron's story! Earth aught to be intresting to read about! Take a break enjoy life, but come back ready to write till your fingers fall off!

AHH ! NO WAY DUUDE !

Are you serious about the final chapter will be next ? :[

Oh my gosh .. you broke my heart. l0l - but seriously ;/

Hopefully its LONG ,

I enjoy this story, as I have all of your stories. I have to say though, I was rather put off by your statement at the end of this chapter. I highly doubt that you intended to be rude, but the truth is, it came across, at least to me, as such. There are many fabulous stories on FictionPress that never make it to 100 reviews, not to mention 1,0 (no, I'm not talking about my own stories, I'm talking about others). Be grateful for all the reviews you have, instead of asking for more.

Does that mean the water elements are going to be in the next story?

Hey!

I love this story so much!

I can't wait for your next update, and i'm kinda sad it's going to end...but oh well, I can't wait to see what happens!

I also can't wait for your next story...

I love your writing style!

Thanks!

xoxo