Reviews for Seared by Desire
let.this.go chapter 20 . 8/30/2010
Poor Lucian. William is crazy. I can't wait until Lucian destroys him! Thanks for updating even though you're injured. I hope you heal quickly!
Kassandra Duric chapter 20 . 8/30/2010
Well, I can't beleave they're finally going home. AND HIS LUCIAN STUPID OR SOMETHING? Sara will know there's something wrong and SHE WILL go looking for Lucian before the time comes. She's not as gullable as he makes her out to seem, and Gareth knows it (and you did it again with him. lol). There's nothing they can do to keep sara and Lucian apart. I hope William gets that head of his cut off and the rest of his body brutally mangled by the next chapter.
Bubbly Girl chapter 20 . 8/30/2010
Great chapter! :) I really hope that you repost "A Wolf's Pride" soon! :)

Peace, Love and Happiness! :)

~Bubly Girl
j.c-chic chapter 20 . 8/30/2010
oh my effing gosh

this is so good


i wish i had a remote control, so i could fast forward to next monday :(
vaniittyy222 chapter 20 . 8/30/2010
You actually call this a buffer chapter? I have read numerous experienced published authors that have more of a "buffer" chapter than this. The fight scene was very interesting and I am still trying to figure out what she needs his sword so badly for. You may call it a buffer but I call it a chance to fill in some of the cliff hangers that you've left in the past. I really do enjoy your writing though I think this is only my second review. Sorry but I have never been a big reviewer
sappyromancelvr chapter 20 . 8/30/2010
You are awesome. :)

Poor Lucien, hopefully Sara will be healed soon. And wow, a demon. Hope it dies fast haha.
Alice Novak chapter 20 . 8/30/2010
I hope your wrist will be back to normal before long! ~ perhaps then you will write with more ease!

Without doubt, this is another one of your finest works! Loved this chapter.

It wasn't cheesy, nor was it too forced (as some writers often mistaken). I thought it was simply marvellous!

Wishing the continued!

Deli .x
tehcow chapter 19 . 8/26/2010
I am always amazed by your writing :)
Midnightamant chapter 19 . 8/26/2010
First of all,I really like your story and I think that it's written well. It's erotic and intense without being inappropriate and I'm glad that Lucian is finally accepting that she's there for him in every way, even for blood. I look forward to future chapters!

Keep Writing,

Midnight Amant
Krowhop chapter 19 . 8/25/2010
Another good chapter. I was reading it at work, and had to do the first 1/2, and then the second 1/2 the next day, cause it was super long. Also, very hot. Good job, overall, though the shifting prespectives threw me a bit. That is probably because I am sleep deprived though, too.
Tzotel431 chapter 19 . 8/24/2010
Oh no! I hope you are alright! If it helps, this was a most lovely chapter! We have been waiting for him to bite her! And here comes the King! Yay!

Kassandra Duric chapter 19 . 8/24/2010
So does this mean that there's only a few chapters left? Pooy. Oh well. Can't wait to see what elemental comes next. And my last comment about Gareth and the water emelemtal still stands, I still say that would be a funny combination since Sara is with Lucian. lol
Carmen chapter 19 . 8/24/2010

I love ur writing :)
ShootMeStaRs chapter 19 . 8/23/2010
I just started reading your story and it has been wonderful. Im loving the characters Thank you for sharing your story!
Bubbly Girl chapter 19 . 8/23/2010
Amazing! :) Great chapter and I can't wait for next Monday! :)

Peace, Love and Happiness! :)

~Bubbly Girl
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