Reviews for Seared by Desire |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Come on Lucian, let Sara burn William alive, making it a slow and painful death. Though, I'm sure Lucian can think of an even more pain ful death than burning. Now, just saying this to say it cause if I don't say it it'll drive me crazy. Wouldn't it be funny if Gareth wound up with a water elemental for his bride? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well, I hope Russel is punished severely for his betrayal. As for William, I hope Sara comes and burns him to death, making it slow and painful. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Poor Sara, she's so sweet to have to deal with the curse that is Seraphina. At least Lucian is okay and there to reassure her. I love them together. Really excellent work, I'm looking forward to reading more! |
![]() ![]() loved it! update soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMFG ! :'D I liked this one . But ... BO HO ... he didn't kill William ;[ Its sad to know that Sara thinks she killed innocent people :p Anyways - good story ;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() So... I liked this chapter. I really did. It continued the story, and I enjoyed seeing Sera interact with the others more. But..something was missing. Mind you, I don't know what it was, or why I even feel that way. But something seemed almost off to me, or left me unsatisfied. It could just be that I am cranky, and annoyed, sitting at work reading, lol. Not sure why, or what was wrong, but I did like it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story SO MUCH! as I love all of your stories and I cant wait for the next update :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() omg that was scary. at first i thought that Lucian had really died, but then he came back i was jumping for joy lol. i really liked this chapter. i can't wait for more. |
![]() ![]() O...M...G...that was so ah amazing! i feel like a broken record but ur chapters never stop amazing me lol have a great vacation! take care |
![]() ![]() ![]() so seraphina comes back full force. thanks for the update |
![]() ![]() ![]() lucian make me happy! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter as always but I was wondering: What happened to William? :) I can't wait for next week and I hope that you enjoy your holiday! :) Peace, Love and Happiness! :) ~Bubbly Girl |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thanks for the chapter! Can't wait for the next one! Update soon! :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() luckily both lucian n sara r not hurt |
![]() ![]() ![]() I've gotten into a bad habit of not reviewing... xD I enjoyed this chapter very much, though Sara seems like such a wimp at times. |