Reviews for Seared by Desire |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Ha! Serves William right, that coward. I'm glad the Malachites are being taken care of, but I hope the fire-elementals make an appearance soon. can't wait for the next chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter! I loved the action in this scene it made it so interesting! Have a great holiday - I have exams for the next two weeks, so I am SO jealous! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Haha. William was scared silly. Poor Sara. At least those were the people that tried to kill Lucian and his people. She can reason. |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Amazing chapter, I can see a difference in the style of writing compared to the wolf series. Your writing has become stronger and I think because it is a different supernatural creature involved. I can't wait for the next chapter. Have a great holiday! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved the chapter! I can't wait for the next one! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my gosh this is really good. They say practice makes perfect and you are a prime example. I read all your wolf stories (which all rocked by the way), but this one has not only a good plot/interesting characters, but also a much better writing style then your previous stories. I just wanted to praise you on that 'cause you deserve it and I can't wait for the next chapter. ~Writer |
![]() ![]() Oh, This is so good! I love it! Keep up the good work and please hurry with the next one! later Em |
![]() ![]() Oh, This is so good! I love it! Keep up the good work and please hurry with the next one! later Em |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great last two chapters! :) So sorry that I hadn't reviewed the last chapter but I had been at Girl Scout Camp and didn't have the time! Sorry but keep up the amazing work! :) Peace, Love and Happiness! :) ~Bubbly Girl |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sry I didn't leave a review last chapter. my phone has been acting up. thanks for the birthday wishes. great chapter but a major cliffie? gr... wouldn't it be nice to be a fire element? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh wow, that was intense. I wasn't expecting the whole brother situation, very cool. I just love Lucian and Sara together. They are adorable and so possessive too. I like it. And I'm glad they've come to an understanding, lol. Can't wait to read more when I get back from vacation and I hope you enjoy your holiday as well! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, that was intence. I hope she doesn't have to burn William to death, risking the peace by accidently killing him. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I think this story is incredibly AWESOME ! |