Reviews for Seared by Desire
SJ chapter 14 . 8/3/2010
omg omg omg...ok wow awsome...the title had me wondering what was gonna happen. n then with the feeding i thought it reffered to that. n then the ending i was like :O n i felt sad until we found out what had really happened. n wow lucian didnt think that in the heart of his enemies city not to take a few guards with him...just wow. idiot.

anyways cant wait to see what happends! soo excited!

take care *hugs*
Kassandra Duric chapter 12 . 8/3/2010
Wow, I thought he was going to wait till the end of the war to reveal that. Wonder what she's going to think about that. Hope she isn't scared off or anything. lol
miquest chapter 14 . 8/3/2010
What...! no updates for a while..? :(

Enjoy your holiday.
Haybell chapter 14 . 8/2/2010
When i read the title i was thinking of someone else, but Russell... that was a good idea! lol

I hope you have fun on your trip!

Hope you get the chapter out on Monday!

Haybell :)

ps: i would love it if you could check out one of my stories. it's called The Power of Destiny. I would love your opinion on it and if it has any potential. Please and thank you!
Krowhop chapter 14 . 8/2/2010
So...I unfortunately did see that coming, as the title of the chapter kinda killed any possible surprise. "An Intimate Betrayal" is kinda obvious. Now, if I hadn't already seen the chapter name, It would have likely been much more surprising...but as we have not really seen a lot of the 2 ...what would you call them? Sub comanders? Lt.'s? Anyway, we haven't seen a ton of them, so it isn't as devistating as it must have been for Lucian, as they are his 'friends'. Still was a really good chapter though, nice balance between the love birds, and everyone else, pretty good flow and action, though another 1/2 paragraph for the main room in the tavern might have made a better transition between the two main parts.
chng234 chapter 14 . 8/2/2010
i dont like william. he is evil
weeeangie chapter 14 . 8/2/2010
i can't wait till this war is over, i just love it when lucian and sara are together, are they going to have babies because in the wolf series we never really got to learn about the lives of the children that tobias and alexandria had. Anyways, i liked it, thanks for updating and writing the way you do.
Becauseuluvme1989 chapter 14 . 8/2/2010
um...I'm not sure how many people read the chapter titles but this one kind of gave away the plot of this particular chapter. I hope it all turns out well for Lucian, and no worries about not having a chapter up on time, you spoil us with being so consistent that we as a following can hold strong for you as well.
208th chapter 14 . 8/2/2010
I didn't see that coming at all! I love your twists- heck, I love your stories in general. I would have never thought them to be brothers!
lashae21 chapter 14 . 8/2/2010
Aww poor Russell. Hopefully he and Lucian pulls through this. You have always done good job with all of your stories.
Northwesst chapter 14 . 8/2/2010
i was shocked! :O totally didnt' see that coming! can't wait for the next update!
mdassley chapter 14 . 8/2/2010
Finally, maybe some giant ass-kcikin on William will finally allow Lucian and Sara to be together fully. I loved it! Can't wait for more!
On The Tip Of My Tongue chapter 14 . 8/2/2010
GAh. Cliffhanger. . I need more.
Katie Valentine chapter 14 . 8/2/2010
Well, William's character always have come across as 'up to no good' so I suppose it isn't a surprise he actually tricked Lucian into thinking he wants peace.. o

This is getting so exciting, o And oh, do enjoy your trip~!
PeterMoore chapter 14 . 8/2/2010
thanks for the update! i hope lucian gets out unscathed
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