Reviews for Seared by Desire
erica chapter 28 . 5/22/2011
chapter broken into 2

I don't have kindle so I cannot help you there but if you also post the website where we can vote for the Authonomy then maybe we the readers can help.
NB-writer chapter 28 . 5/21/2011
1- long chapters every other week, and I wish you luck on getting published!
laughing moon chapter 28 . 5/21/2011
I don't have the kindle, I only have the nook which is through barnes and nobles... I would gladly buy ur books though if there was some way I could use my nook instead... Sorry
Meg Wren chapter 28 . 5/20/2011
I would LOVE to have all of your stories on my ereader but i have a Nook from Barnes and Noble instead of a Kindle. Is it possible for you to get them on there?

Love your work,

Bluntlyhonest chapter 28 . 5/20/2011
hug11kiss chapter 28 . 5/20/2011
I think a long chapter every other week is way better! I think its awesome that your trying to get published and I wish you the best of luck!
Starfighter8 chapter 28 . 5/20/2011
I WANT LONGER CHAPTERSSS... I don't mind waiting. (I shall train my patience while doing so! Hahaha!) "
VanillaSnowdrops chapter 28 . 5/20/2011
chapter broken into 2 every week please! (: your stories are amazing, dont give up! :D
DNAstar chapter 28 . 5/20/2011
love your stories i would so buy them (if i knew how to work it :P ) and to the chapters it dose not matter if its a long one or 2 short ones, your still going to cut it off at a cliff hanger ether way, plus its your story and you can do whatever you want with it, and people will ether like it or not, but then you can just tell them to stuff it if they complain about it, anyway love the stories cant wait for the next one :)
xbrilliantlymorbidx chapter 28 . 5/20/2011
Sounds exciting! I like the weekly bases idea for story update (:
S chapter 27 . 5/14/2011
A lovely story that has all the makings of an enticing and promising adventure. I thoroughly enjoyed your work though I can see significant areas that could have been further developed particularly in relation to the prophecy, the war, and the other elementals. The relationship also seemed rather rushed. Making Sara's journey more difficult and adding more romantic development and tension would have been highly appreciated as would further insight into the world that Sara lives in. However, while building upon these elements would truly make this a masterful work, the story itself remains a good read.

In regards to your unforunate case of plagarism, I can only say it is a horrifyingly dishonest matter. It is understandable to draw on another writer's ideas and develop your own work, but it is deplorable to take another's creation and call it your own. Truly, I cannot see how one could even take pride in it.
WindLessNiteZ chapter 27 . 5/4/2011
Hey I think I review a few of your story or maybe one I don't really remember . Anyway great story , I like the way you write fantasy story it always make me want to read more of your story .

As for that person who plagiarize you ... sigh ... 8 authors ! that's just very terrible of he/her thanks for telling us reader from fictionpress since she insulted so many great authors from fictionpress .

You are a great author don't let the idiots that plagiarize your work bring down your spirit . Keep it up XP
ILveJcb chapter 26 . 4/21/2011
Aw what a wonderful story!

I realised you asked earlier what you could do to get more reviews. One thing i want to make clear is that this story is just as good as your wolf stories. The description is also very good. I think the reason the wolves got more reviews is because the chapters were shorter and there was more of them. If you cut all teh long chapters in this story into two, more chapters would have been reviewed, thus more reviews ooverall. It's too late now and i noticed the next story is almost finished too, but on the third one you can always make shorter chapters :)

Trust me, your stories do NOT lack reviews. Dont be upset.

I LOVED this story! I'll be off to read the next ones soon. Oh by the eay-i loved your vampire. Its a shmae that you dont want to write more about them. But oh well!

Thanks for this story. It's amazing!
ILveJcb chapter 23 . 4/21/2011
OMG i had this strange feeling when Sara was talking to Abigail. So flipping sad!
ILveJcb chapter 21 . 4/20/2011
Weirdly Gareth and Russell remind me of Seb and Ryan from the wolf series...amazing story by the way!
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