Reviews for Seared by Desire
MelodieCC chapter 12 . 7/22/2010
i was on vacation the last few weeks and now i'm reading like three chapters all at once and it was awesome. the story is getting more and more exciting! i have to tell you that when i first start reading your story, i was a bit reluctant because of the whole vampire dead; i was so sick of anything that mildly connects to Twilight. it was the characters and anticipation that kept me reading this story and i'm glad i didn't give up on it. update soon and i hope you can resolve your issues. :)
Krowhop chapter 12 . 7/22/2010
I am surprised Lucian let the jerk touch Sara at all! I 1/2 expected her to draw the man's own sword on him, too. Can't wait to see how she reacts to Lucian suddenly proclaiming her his bride though! Another great chapter, and I'll be waiting for an update! :)
FlowerGirl7 chapter 12 . 7/21/2010
Heyy great chapter as usual! i loved the part where lucian was like she mine all mine, it made me laugh, so possesive lol! and about family problems hope everything goes ok!
SJ chapter 12 . 7/20/2010
AH the cat is out of the bag! i wonder how she is gonna take this...omg i bet shes thrilled n a little mad that he didnt tell her from the so awsome XD

take care. keep writing.
Red Warden chapter 12 . 7/20/2010
First, William- ew, gross I keep seeing this drunk old man with meaty red fingers pawing at Sara, even though he probably looks nothing like that.

Second- Sara's gift was really thoughtful but I think it might have given her position away, that is if William's letter of peace wasn't a trap set by the fire elemental's. I could see them bulling and threatening William.
laughing moon chapter 12 . 7/20/2010
holy crap!and the plot thickens! she finds out! gasp! this is freaking awesome! please update as soon as you can the suspence is killing me! (runs around in circles screaming)! its an awesome chapter! i loved it! hahahaha cant wait till you upload again!
Sweatered5Hatchets chapter 12 . 7/20/2010
Yes, Lucian finally told everyone, including Sara that she is his bride!
Northwesst chapter 12 . 7/20/2010
bahahahaha loved it! the sun part imagined was very pretty! :D
J Money 012 chapter 12 . 7/20/2010
Oh my Gosh. William is such a douche bag. He makes me so angry. I know he'll try something stupid; he would try to get Sara just to hurt Lucian. I half wished that Lucian would just kill him right there and end the stupid war so he and Sara can be together. I will be waiting until next Monday, you make my days so much better. :)
nat13kitty chapter 12 . 7/20/2010
clif hanger! I love it.
lazydancer chapter 12 . 7/20/2010
I'm loving everything about this story so far! Each chapter just gets better and better. I hope to see the new update next week! And I wish you the best of luck with the rent and family situation you are dealing with. :)
Haybell chapter 12 . 7/19/2010
I'm so sorry about your rent factor! I hope everything gets settled! Loves the chapter though Lucian was stupid for telling William about his bride... Lol can't wait for ur next update, but take your time! Your going through a lot and we can understand that!
whitehibiscus chapter 12 . 7/19/2010
It's cute how Seraphina told Sara in her own childish way. It sounds like she's a cute brat, lol.

I like it when Sara surrounded by trusted warriors, it sweet how they're concerned for her.

First encountered with william and I already hate him -_-

Good chapter !
Midnight113 chapter 12 . 7/19/2010
Nice ending, I bet Sara was just a tad shocked at Lucian's words. I can't wait to see what happens with that. I have to say, I absolutely love how she used her power to mimic the sun's light as to provide the vampires with an unforgettable experience. What a lovely gift and so thoughtful. I bet they are all looking at her in a different light after that move. I just adored this chapter and I'm anxious to read more. I hope everything with your family gets better and settles down for you soon. Hopefully it won't go to court but if it does, good luck and you have my best wishes. Take care!
Lost-Souls1988 chapter 12 . 7/19/2010
Uh oh, Lucian has some explaining to do. Great chapter. Can't wait to see their conversation is going to go. Good luck with the family. I'v having a bit of family drama too.
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