|Reviews for Seared by Desire|
| chng234 chapter 12 . 7/19/2010
i have a feeling that lucian is very jeolous n he n sera might quarrel over william. i have a feeling that william will be up to no good
| Bubbly Girl chapter 12 . 7/19/2010
Oh! :) Sara and Lucien are going to "talk"! :) I can't wait for the next chapter and keep up the awesome work! :)
Peace, Love and Happiness! :)
| geminibaby6789 chapter 12 . 7/19/2010
Thanks for the chapter! Wow! Can't believe that he told william that sara's his bride. Can't wait to find out what happens next! :D
| Lovelesshope chapter 12 . 7/19/2010
that was good keep up the good work
| xiomara209 chapter 12 . 7/19/2010
so this is how he choses to tell her, she is his bride..ackward moment..
| Kyuuketsuki Fangirl chapter 12 . 7/19/2010
::grins:: Aww, that's just sweet-Sara lighting up the sky for Lucian and the others!
I loved the chapter, and I can't wait for the next one!
Sorry to hear about your sister problems, I hope they get sorted out!
| libertykill chapter 12 . 7/19/2010
WHAT, he let William know he has a bride.
what a stupid move.
| CaptainSolo chapter 12 . 7/19/2010
I love this story, and i hope things works out with your family so i can have my weekly dose of seared by desire next monday:D:D Don't know what i'd do without it;)
| anonypie chapter 12 . 7/19/2010
I wish you the best in your family situation! It's incredible to see that you're still updating and that you're so dedicated to your fans. Were I in your position, I don't think I'd have the emotional energy to even bother putting something up. I really hope for the best in regards to you.
On another note, this chapter was amazing as usual. I'm so glad to have something to look forward to every Monday morning. It's a nice tradition. I love the way you write; very straight-forward, easy to read..but with the correct mix of language and imagery.
Please continue to keep up the good work!
| Katie Valentine chapter 12 . 7/19/2010
*shrieking in joy*
Okay so he finally admits it she's his bride! I hope Sara believes him! hehehehehe
| weeeangie chapter 12 . 7/19/2010
OMG! They are going to do the down and dirty! Lol! At first I thought that william had a human bride or something but he's just an asshole. Can't wait til next week, hope everything in your family work out, I have two older sisters so I know what you mean when you want to sell your older sister or you sister isn't doing anything just becausee she is older. Good luck! :)
| xXCandycoatedTeardropsXx chapter 12 . 7/19/2010
I seriously just happened to find your stories and I fell in love with each one! I can't wait for you to update this its my favorite of all. Sara's character seems so strong to me and I love how everyone was surprised that she made popular swords.
| x.x buk wurm x.x chapter 12 . 7/19/2010
great chapter, and ew william ! lol. cant wai for next chapter! XD
| DefineVintage chapter 12 . 7/19/2010
oh dear, I hope your family matters get sorted out soon :( I hope you get it sorted out soon, I'd hate something like that happening to me.
Anyway on to the story, great chapter :D And omg, is Lucian going to explain about the bride to Sara in the next chapter? Monday can't come soon enough!
| Ashley M chapter 12 . 7/19/2010
That was the last thing I expected to come out of Lucian's mouth! I was so surprised he told William Sara is his bride! That was a wonderful twist and now I wonder how William will use it to his advantage.