Reviews for Seared by Desire
mdassley chapter 12 . 7/19/2010
FINALLY Lucian tells Sara she is his bride! I was wondering when it was going to slip out! I'm sorry to hear about your family issues, don't worry I can relate. I'm the 2nd girl out of three. Loads of drama in my household! Hope your holding up okay! Great chapter, can't wait for more!
samthur chapter 12 . 7/19/2010
love love love your stories... Thanks for the update! I can't wait till next Monday for another awesome chapter! Though the cliffhangers are killing me!

Family drama always sucks.. but I hope you can smooth out the problems between you, your sister and your family... )
kodochastar chapter 12 . 7/19/2010
Great story! I love how its so unpredictable to me :)I can't wait for the next chapter!
checkyesdana chapter 12 . 7/19/2010
i'm sorry your life is so hectic right now. I love this plot. Im super pumped for the next chapter because it looks like Lucian is ready to make her his (offically). i hope things get easier for you!
Carolinelane chapter 12 . 7/19/2010
o, he finally let it slip she's his bride. I'm a little bit wary of william, but who knows... well you.
sappyromancelvr chapter 12 . 7/19/2010
Oh no, family drama. I understand, it really does suck, no matter what kind it is. It'll all work out in the end though. :)

And glad Lucian finally let it slip. Too bad that that stupid William knows too. Can't wait for next chapter! No pressure though, haha.
Becauseuluvme1989 chapter 12 . 7/19/2010
well that's one way of letting her know...I hope he doesn't try to back pedal with this, but seeing as he's a blunt person i doubt that would happen. I hope everything works out with you and your sister.
abmoreland chapter 12 . 7/19/2010
Yes he finally admitted basically to all that she is his bride, wonder what she will think now. Oh boy alone time in a hotel next, can't wait for that.

Sorry about your family drama, but this story's drama is terrific.
Macy Pearson chapter 12 . 7/19/2010
I am the older sister in my family, unfortunately... I'll look around for you.

I liked Lucian's possessiveness. :) It was cute, even though William could totally try to use Sara now. And I'm looking forward to their 'discussion' next chapter.

I hope everything turns out alright.
rosieroo chapter 12 . 7/19/2010
I cant wait to see how sara will respond to this! Holy wow!

I only saw one mistake near the beginning where you put hear instead of fear. Other then that, great job! And i hope you get your dilemma with your sister sorted out.
Neeyam chapter 12 . 7/19/2010
I hope everything with your family works out smoothly. Your stories have been a great way to start off the week. Good luck.
readaholicxxx chapter 12 . 7/19/2010
haha what a way for Sara to find out she's Lucian's bride!

I'm looking forward to the next chapter...good luck with the family!
PeterMoore chapter 12 . 7/19/2010
i hope everthing gets better with your sister and thanks for the update. lucian let the cat out of the bag. i cannot wait to see what happens
DNAstar chapter 12 . 7/19/2010
hahah she knows now hee hee thats good great chap
Arcadian Viera chapter 12 . 7/19/2010
First of all...

OH MY GOODNESS YOU'RE GOING TO KILL ME ALL WEEK (or possibly longer D: ) BECAUSE OF THAT CLIFFHANGER.

Secondly...

I like the plot developments in this chapter very much, especially the evidence of growing equilibrium between Sara and Seraphina, not to mention Sara's revelation (that's she's Lucian's bride). I wonder how Lucian's going to explain himself to her. She might try to burn him or something for lying to her. Ahahaha. Keyword being "try."

Lastly...

I hope you solve your problems. *hug*
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