Reviews for Seared by Desire |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my god! I loved every part about this chapter except for that creepy William dude! Please update more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter |
![]() ![]() Whho discussion! ;D WINK WINK AHAHAHAHAHAHHAHA |
![]() ![]() ![]() I LOVE THIS STORY I CAN'T WAIT FOR MONDAY AND I HOPE THINGS WORK OUT FOR YOU YOUR AN AMAZING WRITER AND I WISH YOU THE BEST! |
![]() ![]() ![]() argh! it was the perfect moment to tell her she's his bride! butthead! LOL great story! all the characters in my head have a translyvanian accent for some reason! haha makes it sexier! ;D can't wait for the update! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really like this more soon please! |
![]() ![]() I love your writing. I read your whole Wolf series in three days and then continued onto this one. I can't wait to see what it turns into. I already love this story. At first some of your words confused me seeing as I live in the U.S. and we use different words. Haha! You do better with writing longer chapters now that it has a definite purpose and ending. Continue writing... please. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well, I don't like Laura or what ever her name was. She almost ruined Lucian and Sara. I hope the war ends soon, not that I want the story to end soon, I just want to see those two together faster. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Why won't Lucian tell Sara that she's his bride? The story is fascinating! I love it. It combines two things I love: people who can control the elements and the supernatural (vampires, etc). I have never read a story that combines the two! Please update! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story is BEAUTIFUL! I LOVE IT! Please update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really liked the length of this chapter-it was good. I do wonder why he didn't take the opertunity to tell her that SHE is his bride though. Is it really something that he wants to keep from her? Won't she be annoyed when she finds out later, and remembers that he didn't tell her when she first heard about it? Anyway, keep up the good work! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() i loved this chapter! She'll have to become a vampire for him to quench the flame... when's she's vampire she won't have her fire anymore. Lucian will be hesitant to do it, but in the end they'll all end up happy... How right am I? lol Midnight :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() well i love the loong chapters lol! lucian and sara are sweet, great chapter keep em comin! x |
![]() ![]() ![]() YAYY AN EXTRA LONG CHAPPIE :D it was awesome, I loved it :) i do have one question, though. Surely Lucian could turn Sara into a vampire if she's his bride, or the fact that her being his bride makes her immortal? lol I know you won't tell me cause it's part of the storyline isn't it? again, loved it :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() So if Lucian is a born vampire does that mean both his mother and father were vampires or was his father one and his mother a human bride? Also if Lucian does claim Sara will she live as long as he does? I was worried for a seconded that Sara was going to start pushing him away, but I'm glad things were resolved. As for the chapter length, long ones are fine. |