Reviews for Seared by Desire
nat13kitty chapter 11 . 7/13/2010
very impressive craftsmanship of the characters.
Pippa892 chapter 11 . 7/13/2010
long chapters twice a week would be good! :-)

I look forward to going to work on a Monday just to get the next chapter. (at lunch time obviously)

I read A Wolf's Duty and was hooked - the whole series was well written and unique and it looks like this story is going to be equally good.
x.x buk wurm x.x chapter 11 . 7/13/2010
great chapter! really good, but why doesnt lucian just tell sara that she's his bride ?
Jojo089 chapter 11 . 7/13/2010
And the plot thickens, I have to say the story is flowing very nicely. There's no dead spots and I like how Sara and Lucian's relationship is developing. Looks like Lucian's self control is slipping, that lake scene was hot and steamy.

While I do prefer longer chapters to shorter ones, I'm more focused on getting my weekly fix of Lucian/Sara yumminess. So if you can do long chapters every week, that's awesome. If not, well I'm fine with short chapters. Just do what works for you. )
whitehibiscus chapter 11 . 7/13/2010
i like the progress in their relationsip :DD

and i can't wait for Sara's reaction when she find out that she's Lucian's mate.

keep it up ! :)
Goddess Sati chapter 11 . 7/13/2010
it's amazing:)
rosieroo chapter 11 . 7/13/2010
trust me, the long chapters are awesome! with shorter chapters, it breaks up the flow of the story.

plus, this story is just amazing so I want as much as possible each update!

cant wait till the next update!
My.Brutal.Romance18 chapter 11 . 7/13/2010
I loved this chapter! It was very sweet at the end! I hope you continue to make your chapters longer! I really love this story!
Greeneyes616 chapter 11 . 7/12/2010
I love this story you have, its wonderful, and so detailed! I'm excited to await your next chapter :)
pinkie509 chapter 11 . 7/12/2010
Oh my gosh! Please keep the chapters long. They flow more easily. I love this story and I believe I loved it before I even started reading it lol. It doesn't feel rushed when the chapter flows as this one did. I can't wait until next week. My birthday is the 18th maybe updating a day early for a gift would really make it special! I will be 24. You have such eat ideas and you are the best writer I have come across on here by far! I think I am a #1 fan here!
rae chapter 11 . 7/12/2010
aww! that was really sweet. I like how you focus on both human relations and then include the plot (I'm not just talking about this chapter).

I would love for you to post out massive chapters but I don't want your plot or quality to diminish. Post only as much as you know is quality work and everyone should be happy :)
Midnight113 chapter 11 . 7/12/2010
Aw, she's worth it. ;) So cute. I'm excited she's discovered the whole bride thing and I like how it's continuing to be a secret about her actually being said bride, lol. That scene in the woods with them going at it was hot! Awesome work.

I like how creative you've been and continue to be with these characters, the whole sleeping underground thing is pretty cool and I just love how they interact and feed off of each other (no pun intended). His restraint and control is admirable though I'll give him that. Loved the length of this chapter, keep it up!
KatherineMarie chapter 11 . 7/12/2010

The longer chapter length was lovely, as was the really hot scene between our lovebirds!

I can't wait for when she finds out that she's his bride, as well as how you're going to overcome the immortal/mortal dilemma. ;]

Looking forward to next week!
Becauseuluvme1989 chapter 11 . 7/12/2010
Aww they are so cute together. But seriously Lucian should have told her that she was his bride. She is not going to be happy that he kept that from her now that she knows what a bride is. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Jester79 chapter 11 . 7/12/2010
If your able and have the ideas that can produce chapters at this length - go for it. I like to see a little more substance to each one and you give plenty.
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