|Reviews for Seared by Desire|
| Efra chapter 11 . 7/12/2010
Thanks loved it. I like short and sweet. Buy long ones are a nice surprise.
| SJ chapter 11 . 7/12/2010
woho it is getting hot up in here lol wow had me going there for a bit. i thought wow moving that fast so soon? so not like u, but then u stopped all that n made it more emotional n sweet. perfect way to do the chapter lol
loved it loved it loved it! n its soo nice that the ppl are starting to warm up to sara, its about time she was treated with decency.
good job as always...
| bobbychu chapter 11 . 7/12/2010
the chapter length was long but it was so packed that I didn't even realize how long it was,I only knew after you said that it was longer than normal. Thanks for the update! I like reading the interaction between the couple and betweemn the vampire community and Sara
| Kyuuketsuki Fangirl chapter 11 . 7/12/2010
Aw, the ending bit was so sweet! I loved it.
I adored this chapter, and I can't wait for the next one!
| chng234 chapter 11 . 7/12/2010
why did lucian refused to tell sera that she is his bride?
| sappyromancelvr chapter 11 . 7/12/2010
That was hot. ;) And when will Lucian tell her? Probably the moment he drinks her blood or something (actually bond?) she'll be immortal like him? maybe? Anyways, it's only logical that she's jealous. They are so cute together~!
| geminibaby6789 chapter 11 . 7/12/2010
Thanks for the chapter! I really liked it! At least she doesn't mind that he'e a vampire. Can't wait for the next one! Update soon! :D
| angel-fire-007 chapter 11 . 7/12/2010
Can humans be turned into vampires, because laura hinted that it couldnt happen? im worried about how their relationship will continue... when is lucian going to tell sara that she is in fact his bride?
anyways awesome story! i like it
| Ashley M chapter 11 . 7/12/2010
I loved the super long chapter! And i like how you input worries that Sara and Lucian would have because she is mortal while he isn't. Letting Sara know about the bride issue was a wonderful twist but i don't entirely understand why Lucian didn't tell her that she was his bride (becuase then she wouldn't worry). But altogether, i loved the chapter and your characters. Please keep up the amazing work!
| anonypie chapter 11 . 7/12/2010
I'm not sure if I have reviewed any of your stories...I'm usually a silent reader haha! But it's time I personally let you know how much I appreciate your work and your writing. You're so original and have a gift with words, and I absolutely love your longer chapters because they make up for the fact that you don't update twice a week like with the wolf series. So, please..give us longer chapters. This was a hot chapter :D and I'm so anxious to see what you have in store for us!
| Cafana989 chapter 11 . 7/12/2010
I LOVE IT! THIS IS DEFINITELY ONE OF MY FAVORITE CHAPTERS SO FAR!
| SayanaDeDevarsky chapter 11 . 7/12/2010
As always I love love loved it. And because of this I love seeing the really long chapters. But I alos know that life can get in the way and make writing huge chapters hard. So whatever you're able to comfortablly manage would be perfect for everyone, lol (cause I speak for everyone). Besides you're epic. This is give you a lot of leway.
| Bubbly Girl chapter 11 . 7/12/2010
Aww... This chapter was really sweet! :) I think that you should most definitely write the massive chapters becauseit holds me over until the next Monday! :) I can't wait for next week! :)
Peace, Love and Happiness! :)
P.S. Do you know what I find amazing? That you have written 11 chapters and you already have 448 reviews! :)
| MsBling chapter 11 . 7/12/2010
aw that was reli cute i love lucian him n sara r reli gd wiv each other
| On The Tip Of My Tongue chapter 11 . 7/12/2010
they should all be this length. :)