really cool chapter...like it how sara is confident unlike many other main heroines who always doubt themselves...i like confident women and non-arrogant men in the lead roles...arrogant assholes are so overrated.

Oh, its getting hot! lol Great job on this one, keep up the good work and please hurry with the next one!

later

Em

LOL! :) This chapter was so funny and amazing and SO HAPPY-LIKE! :) *content sigh* I just love your writing to death! :) I hope that you get you laptop charger thingy back soon because I am dying for more Lucien/Sara moments! :)

Peace, Love and Happiness! :)

~Bubbly Girl

You are the best, can't wait for more!

That was awesome, I love that they are so drawn to each other and I'm impressed he's shown such self control. Of course it looks like the pretty thin thread is about to break, lol. I can't wait to see what happens next between them, this is getting so interesting. Sorry about your computer, I'll keep my fingers crossed for your charger to be safely back in your hands soon. ;)

I hope you get your laptop charger, I can't wait until the

Next chapter.

That was such a great chapter! I hope you get you charger, but if not, I suppose I'll survive. :)

Have a great week and thank you so much!

WOHO haha loosing his ALL MIGHTY MAN POWER OF CONTROL! hahaha love ur chapter. good cliff hanger to ;)

good luck. n dont worry b happy _

*hugs*

take care.

OMG! THAT WAS THE BEST CHAPTER YET BECAUSE THEY FINALLY KISSED ;)) LOL

Please get your laptop cord back lol ;)) i can't wait till next Monday!

Haybell ;)

Good chapter, there was a quite a whirlwind of emotions so at times i felt a little confused, but it was stil interesting . Keep it up, and don't worry about your charger. If you can't get it back for awhile just think of it as more time to improve on the story.

Vivi-Annie }-

:( Im sad for you Hope you get your charger soon (:

i really liked - its completely different from the wolf series but still really good!

charlotte

A very good chapter indeed. I loved Lucian's reaction to Sara and now she knows that Lucien is attracted to her, I wonder what she is going to.

I liked the way you described Lucien and Sara's reactions, thoughts and feelings, I think it adds more depth to the story and allows us to relate (well you can't really relate to a vampire or someone with the powers of a fire element) to the characters.

Also I feel that the sexual tension will build between them soon.

Thanks for the update and I can't wait for next week!

so good now. I love this kiss so early in the story )

Oh dear, I do hope you get your charger soon darl! :D *hugs*

And I like Lucian, hehe, he sounds so.. erm cool? LOL. Plus hot! Whooshh~! Okay, that sounds contradicting.. But I do love where it is going.. Can't wait to see what happens when the war escalates into some big fight or something.. It's be interesting! Plus when Seraphina would..Hm.. "Go away"? LOL. Not sure how to put it.. :D