The story was a little wordy but I still liked it :) It was really cute.

The beginning was a little slow but it definitely picked up and I can't wait to read more! :)

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only just finished chp 3 there but an intriguing beginning. shall continue on, hope the rest of it is as good. :)

That was an amazing story! You have an intricate ability to weave together characters and plot. Your descriptions and dialogue and well thought out and I wasn't able to sleep the last couple of nights because I couldn't stop reading this story. I love finding new adventures on here, but your blew me away. I rarely review, but I had to send something off to you. Thank you for a great couple of days!

Ugh! people like that drive me fucking CRAZY! Who the hell do they think they are? Absolutely repulsive! I'm so sorry you have to go through something like this.

omg this is one of the best stories i have read

thanx so much !

It WAS AWESOME! The Calder thing threw me off a little, it was unexpectedly expected.

You're awesome, and you write really well. Your imagination is enviable and i really look forward to reading your other stories:)

the plagiarism that happened sucks ass, i hope everything works out for you!

holy shit! Okay, seriously, I hate the fire elementals! Wow, That was a whole lot of lies! I hope Lucien comes soon1 Poor Sara!

oh! Don'tcha just love avenging vampires? So awesome!

woah! lots of animosity from Sara! Honestly, I can't blame her:) Loved the way she acted in the village!

wow! that was super intense! They are so perfect together! Love it, love it!

A determined Sara is just too cute:)

hot damn! So awesome(are you noticing a pattern to my reviews here? I can't help it though. Awesome seems like the only word to do justice to it).

Woah! That was so cool! Its so cute that Lucian and Sara are showing so much affection for each other. you know, for an emotionally dimmed vampire, Lucian is doing pretty good.

Loved it!