I love your first chapter I can't whait to read more

so far so good lol! poor sara! cant wait for the next update :D

woah that was intense.

Wow, this is one unique storyline that's for sure. I'm very excited about this, already a suspenseful and intriguing start. I can't wait to read more!

I thought that was awesome, a really good setup. You've definitely done a lot in this first chapter, not to say the least but you've stoked my desire to read more, excuse the pun :P. I think my only issue is this one line early on, its just kind of ... I dunno its a bit like an annoying splinter in my thumb :/ um, its something like she didn't feel the emotion loneliness anymore, I don't know why, I mean I understand what you mean, I just think something like 'she'd long grown accustomed to loneliness' or something similar would be more fitting.

Anyhow, other than that minor thing, I really enjoyed this first chapter, in fact I'm really quite bummed that we'll only be getting weekjly updates :P

I figure you spoilt me, what with ur previous update pattern :)

I'm really curious as to what will happen next, who's serafina? Who will clean up the ashes? :P ( sorry I feel like that voice at the end of are you afraid of the dark :) find out next time ...)

Really lookin forward to the next chapter, think you seem to be quite adept at this elemental thing :)

Take care

Jainblu

Aka

Zee-Dee

Oh... My... God... That was f*cking awesome! It did start out a little slow, but it picked up pace quick. I do believe this will be better than the wolf stories. ) Can't wait until next time.

I love it, can't wait for the next chapter!

Wow epic start to a new story! I'm really looking forward to the twists and places this story is going to go!

o I can't wait and I have to wait till next week? oh gosh! this sucks! please just do one week of two updates. just this once... pretty please?

OMG! I love it i cant wait for more! Its sad though that you only can update once a week! They better be long!

oh my freaking gosh.

MORE!

This looks really interesting so far! I love how there are elements, because I think that's actually a good plot to start with. Sara's a good character so far. I wonder why her parents threw her out... The descriptions in the story was good and detailed - great start so far!

I can tell already that I'm definitely going to love this series :P.