Reviews for Miranda's Adventure 2
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Backseat Benediction chapter 2 . 5/3/2010
be careful to not overuse the word 'said', as it can become quite repetitive. other than that, great work!
Backseat Benediction chapter 1 . 5/3/2010
suggestion - maybe you want to put the prologue as a new chapter? just a personal preference, but it helps to draw in readers.

anyways, i love this story so far. your character descriptions were really superb. can't wait to read on!