|Reviews for Reoccurring Dreams|
| 3M2R chapter 1 . 5/12/2010
Aww... I expected something more... something deeper...
I was looking through the titles this title grabbed me just like "shades of grey" did.
I'm not really into descriptive I prefer narrative. But this is still a good attempt in descriptive i should say. Could help by elaborating a little on how they haunt, warm and inspire instead of how they come back over and over. You repeat that point too much. Recurring dreams, the most important part is in the last 3 lines you wrote. But it was sadly too short to evoke any emotions.
I can't write descriptive much, so that's just IMO. Keep writing.