Reviews for Rejected |
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![]() ![]() So you will be adding further one shots, i mean even after "Firepalce"? Please say yes! I want more of these two! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm sobbing for some reason xD Sorry, I'm a weirdo. It's just that this story brings back so many memories for me. I had stumbled across this on Wattpad years back, around 2012-13 if I'm not mistaken, way before I was aware what Wattpad and the like were used for. This was the first original fictional work I retain any memory of reading. I had been blown away by your impeccable and exemplary writing skills. This was incomplete on Wattpad back then and I had been depressed about it, for like a few years before I had discovered the completed version on fiction press. And now, even after so many years, this story never fails to bring out that girl in her early teens, fresh into the world of reading, jumping in joy and vibrating in anticipation and excitement over a new update. I always find myself coming back here every two months to seek comfort and solace. My safe haven *Cries happy tears and blows nose* Alright alright I'll stop now. I'm taking this novel to my grave. This has been said time and time again, but thank you so much for writing this extraordinary piece of work! |
![]() ![]() the beginning of this chapter especially reminded me of pride and prejudice... delilah's mother is basically mrs. bennet |
![]() ![]() story was simple but really good with likable characters even when they did dumb things (cough damian cough). thank you. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Beautiful story. Loved it! You are an amazing writer. |
![]() ![]() ![]() here i was chilling... taking a trip down memory lane... trying to read old stories for comfort... and then BAM! Rejected- updated feb. 7, 2019. I COULD NOT BELIEVE MY EYES. after 9 years and you can still tell us the stories of your characters vividly. You are amaaaahzing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() wonderful, thank you! |
![]() ![]() Even though it’s been a while since I first stumbled upon this story I find myself returning to it with such regularity it’s almost creepy... haha. Kudos to you. |
![]() ![]() Wonderfully written and a truly amazing story I could not get enough of. Thank you for sharing it with us! I wish though your sequel with Cecelia was complete. |
![]() ![]() It's too short... |
![]() ![]() What a great read. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hi there. I've just come across this story and read prologue and ch 1. The concept is captivating since it deals with a woman's honor and self-respect. I love such stories. :) Your story is very good. But there are technical errors a lot that make it distracting to focus on the write up. Otherwise, the story is very enjoyable. :) |
![]() ![]() Whoops. Damian** not Damien. Sorry for the earlier typo on my review. |
![]() ![]() Finally! I'm so happy to see them getting along for real. I don't think you've mucked up the characters. I've been reading your story for the past two days and I think it's been done quite nicely. Delilah has more backbone than before and she seems more resigned to her fate at being pestered by Damien. While Damien's change in tactics concerning Delilah does seem a little sudden, it's not really unbelievable given his stubborn nature (the don't tell me what to do attitude) and her help with his father's health. They do seem like they are becoming friends of some sort. |
![]() ![]() ![]() In which year is this exactly? |