Reviews for When the Sun Goes Out
Punslinger chapter 1 . 5/7/2010
You have some good rhymes here, and the poem flows smoothly with a strange eerie beauty. Well done.

(If you like scarey poetry, you could look up my Robert Louis Stevenson parody. And for romance S-F, check our "A Cowboy Courtship.)
BananaBabe903 chapter 1 . 5/5/2010
Wow, I really loved this! :) Great work!