|Reviews for one day|
| hanging on ariadne's thread chapter 1 . 1/15/2012
i can relate completely. love the raw emotion presented in just twelve words. now that's one hell of a hiaku.
kudos to you.
| Dark Blue Lover chapter 1 . 10/17/2011
Heh - provocative but it works! Damn relatable xD
| the sun softly smiles chapter 1 . 12/31/2010
I like this - the determination, like you're a force to be reckoned with and you know it. nice work :)
| chaos called creation chapter 1 . 7/16/2010
This is what we call profanity done right.
| young and the reckless chapter 1 . 6/3/2010
i love swearing in poetry. it seems so unethical to me.
like we're supposed to be creating the cookie cutter beauty,
but instead we're twisting it to form a new kind of amazing.
also, i like the frustration in this. nice work.
| classic violet chapter 1 . 5/17/2010
Provocative, compelling, emotional. Well done.
| nickyO chapter 1 . 5/6/2010
Oh dear. Do I need to call 007? ;)
| Creeping Collarbones chapter 1 . 5/5/2010
I like how to the point this is.
I can relate too.
the 'fucking' really made it for me (: