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hanging on ariadne's thread chapter 1 . 1/15/2012
this.

i can relate completely. love the raw emotion presented in just twelve words. now that's one hell of a hiaku.

kudos to you.
Dark Blue Lover chapter 1 . 10/17/2011
Heh - provocative but it works! Damn relatable xD

Keep writing!
the sun softly smiles chapter 1 . 12/31/2010
I like this - the determination, like you're a force to be reckoned with and you know it. nice work :)
chaos called creation chapter 1 . 7/16/2010
This is what we call profanity done right.

Keep writing!
young and the reckless chapter 1 . 6/3/2010
i love swearing in poetry. it seems so unethical to me.

like we're supposed to be creating the cookie cutter beauty,

but instead we're twisting it to form a new kind of amazing.

also, i like the frustration in this. nice work.
classic violet chapter 1 . 5/17/2010
Provocative, compelling, emotional. Well done.
nickyO chapter 1 . 5/6/2010
Oh dear. Do I need to call 007? ;)
Creeping Collarbones chapter 1 . 5/5/2010
I like how to the point this is.

I can relate too.

the 'fucking' really made it for me (:

Nice piece.