|Reviews for Paradox Hearts|
| Dark Kurogane chapter 5 . 1/1/2011
This chapter was fascinating. There were a lot of things brought up, and their fight scene was just wonderful. I feel sorry for Volgore, being pulled in like that with little sleep. I wonder how much longer he'll last?
| Yaoi Love-Love Girl chapter 5 . 1/1/2011
A lot of action here! I love it! I like when they were fighting the slime and stuff! It was awesome!
| Iruka-sama chapter 5 . 1/1/2011
I wonder who actually does have the power. I want to say that Volgore does, because the blue fog went to him that came out of the box, but you make it seem like maybe it's not him. It'll be interesting to see who ends up defeating Lafarga!
| paynt chapter 2 . 12/28/2010
Interesting chapter, it kind of reminds me of the movie 'Groundhog Day', with the constant repeating of the same day.
Volgore seems to be an interesting character, and I felt like I was getting a bird's eye view of a famous celebrity's day ... only repeated. Keep up the great writing!
| PlayfulArtistKitty chapter 4 . 9/26/2010
i like this story it's really cool so far
| Starlight Rhapsody chapter 4 . 9/24/2010
I'm curious about what will happen next to the three of them...
And who's the man that Suzanna want to find?
Please update it soon
I'm waiting for the next chapter of this one too as well
| Herp de Derp chapter 2 . 9/9/2010
I really like Volgore and the fact that he kept time hopping back and fourth between times. It was really funny to see how sick and tired he kept getting each time. I was laughing my ass off when he screamed in the middle of his sexy photoshoot.
I also liked the girl character that sent him to another world. I think that she has a huge purpose in the story so I'm interested in seeing more of her.
Suzanna is interesting too. I like she and Volgore's relationship and I can't wait to see how things will progress with the two of them. This is just too exciting and I'm glad that I happened to find this story in a search. Keep up the good work!
| Herp de Derp chapter 1 . 9/9/2010
This has a really good start! I love this little prologue so far and it sound like a very interesting story.
| BreeJalil chapter 1 . 9/5/2010
Please remove your plagiarized quote from your summary and come up with something of your own. You know what I'm talking about, imitation is NOT the sincerest form of flattery, so if you truly liked this author you would not steal their work.
| Kurogane Black Ninja chapter 4 . 8/28/2010
So, the mysterious girl was Koishii. I wonder what part she'll play in the group and also for the development of the team. I wonder why Suzanna decided to become a godslayer as well. You've got me interested in several aspects of this story. I can't wait to read more.
| Kurogane Black Ninja chapter 3 . 8/28/2010
Suzanna just keeps getting more and more mysterious as the story progresses. I find myself wondering exactly what Volgore wonders. Also, I love the fight with Vocal. These chapters are filled with action. It almost reminds of of Crimson and Clover Chronicles in that aspect.
| Kurogane Black Ninja chapter 2 . 8/28/2010
Suzanna seems like a very interesting character, and Volgore provides wonderful comic relief. I love how he just kept going back in time and running into the Girl of Anai. Also, you did forget to mention that he got dressed after all of those photo shoots, I simply thought that I should point that out to you.
| Dark Kurogane chapter 4 . 8/15/2010
I wonder what Ex-Mechanica will have to do with everything, and what his connection is to Lafarga. Your gods are very interesting in this series, much like Sacrifice and they have a great significance in this story. I also wonder who will get the power. Suzanna will be angry, I'm sure, if it isn't her.
| Yaoi Love-Love Girl chapter 4 . 8/15/2010
Great chapter! This was really funny too. I like it when Volgore was yanked up by that rope. He's so funny. I love him.
| Iruka-sama chapter 4 . 8/15/2010
Already you've managed to make me love Volgore and Koishii. I'm routing for them as a couple now. I just really love their realationship. I hope Volgore gets some sleep soon. The poor guy is having it rough lately.