|Reviews for Most of you|
| simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 6/18/2010
Review Marathon this weekend! (link in my profile)
I really like those first two lines. Those descriptions are really interesting. The idea of someone residing in voice boxes and eye sockets created really great image for me.
The phrasing with that last line just seemed weird for me. I dunno. It just didn't seem to flow well from the lines before it. Almost like it was missing a subject. Who (or what) is tossing and turning in sleep?
| Isca chapter 1 . 5/8/2010
"Eye sockets toss and turn in sleep." Terrifying (in a good way!). This reminded me of 'The Sandman' myth.
| Black Sparrow chapter 1 . 5/8/2010
This is beautiful. :)
| nickyO chapter 1 . 5/7/2010
Creepy feel to this one (for me). Makes me think of being caged within my own body.