Reviews for I don't want a lover
growing-up chapter 1 . 6/16/2010

I think i like your way at looking at the world.

this is really deep and slightly cynical and just all out wonderful.
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 5/16/2010
I like the title because it compliments the piece. It adds a level to it about what the narrator wants. I like the last line a lot two. The image of lost kids holding hands is a good one and interesting because usually hand-holding is seen as a good thing. I also like your "adult" want being sleeping at the end of the day. It's so mundane, but true about adulthood. Much more realistic than the idea that being an aduly means sex all the time. Nice job!

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Isca chapter 1 . 5/8/2010
"Two lost kids." This line really struck me - like the two people were only together because they were afraid of being alone.
Black Sparrow chapter 1 . 5/8/2010
This is beautiful and kind of sad. I love it.
Princess-anna57 chapter 1 . 5/7/2010
Haha, that's my attitude. Keep it up!

~Anna~ _
nickyO chapter 1 . 5/7/2010
Another well voice rebellion of social pressures/messages.