|Reviews for Ice Cream|
| no.peace.los.angeles chapter 1 . 5/10/2010
Wow. This is very different. I like it. :) I love the alliteration of "storks shrivel," and the use of the word shrivel there. Awesome. "mouths taste doves" is also strangely appropriate. Keep writing! :)
| Isca chapter 1 . 5/8/2010
"Mouths taste doves." Hard-hitting. Eating a symbol of freedom and purity. That's very beautifully macabre.
| Black Sparrow chapter 1 . 5/8/2010
Interesting and a little out of the ordinary. Quite imaginative. I like it :)
| nickyO chapter 1 . 5/7/2010
This one I'll have to puzzle over (again, not a bad thing).